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Rewind
Feeling the pressure comes
Feel the pain in my chest
Go down on my knees
I can't catch my breath
My brain freezing up
My Legs begin to tremble
My arms begin to get weak
No one around to seek
Can't feel the tear rolling from my eye
Just imagining getting my life right
No one there to rescue me
I wish I can rewind and see
but I think its too late
Because this is my last heart beat
Feel the pain in my chest
Go down on my knees
I can't catch my breath
My brain freezing up
My Legs begin to tremble
My arms begin to get weak
No one around to seek
Can't feel the tear rolling from my eye
Just imagining getting my life right
No one there to rescue me
I wish I can rewind and see
but I think its too late
Because this is my last heart beat
Published 17th Oct 2014
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17th Oct 2014 8:56pm
Nice!!! That's a deep thing, my take on it is you must be right with God before its to late, the world is in its last day, and we live in a corrupt society. Continue to keep writing, I love to comment!
18th Oct 2014 9:45pm
