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Non-Venetian Journey
Daydreaming at dawn
the campanile is passing by
time to change over
dropping into my favourite bar
for a quick caffè doppio
then heading further south
the Arsenale is waiting for me
gondolas lurking far beyond but
I have to get off the commuter train
the campanile is passing by
time to change over
dropping into my favourite bar
for a quick caffè doppio
then heading further south
the Arsenale is waiting for me
gondolas lurking far beyond but
I have to get off the commuter train
Published 17th Oct 2014
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19th Oct 2014 9:39pm
Hmmm. At least Venetian day-dreams ... May I invite you for a Spritz at the foot of the Rialto Bridge, watching the sunset? A wonderful non-Venetian poem ...
22nd Oct 2014 9:30pm
Thanks for your friendly comment.
Sitting at the foot of the Rialto Bridge watching the sunset? Buon'idea! :-)
Sitting at the foot of the Rialto Bridge watching the sunset? Buon'idea! :-)
23rd Oct 2014 4:56pm
It was since the crowd was on the bridge :-). And don't forget the 'Spritz'. Molto delizioso!
23rd Oct 2014 9:04pm
Chi parla ;-) "It was since the crowd was on the
bridge :-). And don't forget the 'Spritz'."
Molto volentieri! Maybe the view from the top of the Campanile is less disturbed by the crowd?
bridge :-). And don't forget the 'Spritz'."
Molto volentieri! Maybe the view from the top of the Campanile is less disturbed by the crowd?
20th Oct 2014 8:05pm
I wonder what's 'Non-' about the 'Venetian'? The description is applicable to Venice (admit I have not been there).
22nd Oct 2014 9:34pm
The campanile,the Arsenale and the gondolas described therein are all of non-Venetian origin :-).
Thanks for dropping in, Solomon. :-)
Thanks for dropping in, Solomon. :-)
23rd Oct 2014 1:00am
it's a brief trip through a city of procurement. but the train has a schedule to keep...
