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Daybreak
The perfect day would begin
Waking up next to you
Anywhere in the world would do
At the cabin would be perfection
I so want to just lay next to you
Feeling you skin on skin
My head laying on your chest
Lost in the rythm of your breath
Just the two of us hiding out
Let's disappear completely off the grid
I don't need the rest of the world
As long as I am in your arms
Giving you kisses so soft
That you don't wake up
Only your body reacts
The pleasure I give you always shows
Of course I cannot leave out one lil thing
I'll finally wake you up in your favorite way
Having my breakfast in bed
Did you wake up hungry this morning darlin'?
Waking up next to you
Anywhere in the world would do
At the cabin would be perfection
I so want to just lay next to you
Feeling you skin on skin
My head laying on your chest
Lost in the rythm of your breath
Just the two of us hiding out
Let's disappear completely off the grid
I don't need the rest of the world
As long as I am in your arms
Giving you kisses so soft
That you don't wake up
Only your body reacts
The pleasure I give you always shows
Of course I cannot leave out one lil thing
I'll finally wake you up in your favorite way
Having my breakfast in bed
Did you wake up hungry this morning darlin'?
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Re: Daybreak
Anonymous
16th Oct 2014 6:10pm
Belle,
Now that right there is perfection! Sounds like a country boys dream for sure :-) You are on a HOT streak today!!!
tornado
Now that right there is perfection! Sounds like a country boys dream for sure :-) You are on a HOT streak today!!!
tornado
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re: Re: Daybreak
16th Oct 2014 7:00pm
Well ty Mr Tornado...
I just write exactly whats on my mind at the time.
Ive got lots of inspiration
I just write exactly whats on my mind at the time.
Ive got lots of inspiration
Re: Daybreak
16th Oct 2014 6:19pm
great poem wrote well you are on a good run with your hot poetry like the pic also
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16th Oct 2014 7:02pm
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16th Oct 2014 9:15pm
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17th Oct 2014 2:48pm
Thank you so much Speak
Its far from perfected
But in life whats ever truly perfect
Its far from perfected
But in life whats ever truly perfect
Re: Daybreak
16th Oct 2014 10:29pm
LSB, you paint such marvelously sensual and yet comfortable scenes. Makes ya want to be there now. Beautifully written my dear. Oh and the pic is super seductive.
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17th Oct 2014 2:56pm
GW im glad u like the way i dabble hun
I love expressing how im feeling n that moment
I love expressing how im feeling n that moment
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16th Oct 2014 11:12pm
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17th Oct 2014 3:00pm
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16th Oct 2014 11:25pm
A place to hideout with such a beauty as you would be heaven on Earth Belle. I must say your poems get better and better Belle. Loved it.
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17th Oct 2014 3:01pm
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17th Oct 2014 5:48am
Belle, your poetry is fulfilling. the cabin sounds very seductive. breakfast for two...
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17th Oct 2014 3:03pm
Its one of the most peaceful spots in the world
It just needs to b shared
It just needs to b shared
Re: Daybreak
17th Oct 2014 2:45pm
Mmmmmm hell yea it'd make me hungry EVERY morning
to have 'breakfast' served in bed lol
N yea, wow that pic. is mmmmmmm niiiiiccceeee
sweet lookin ass lol
to have 'breakfast' served in bed lol
N yea, wow that pic. is mmmmmmm niiiiiccceeee
sweet lookin ass lol
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17th Oct 2014 10:24pm
When I'm eating that pussy all the way to the spine you'll know and feel how hungry I'am. Lol!
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