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Temptation
Oh masterful poet
The world you weave with your words
Is so full of temptation
May I join you there Sir?
The sultry situations
Created by your sexy pen
Keep me enthralled
Totally drawing me in
The power you have over me
Is so very evident
I don't have to ask
You must be aware of it
The one true question is
Is a very simple one
If this lil Southern girl knocks
Are you going to let her in?
The world you weave with your words
Is so full of temptation
May I join you there Sir?
The sultry situations
Created by your sexy pen
Keep me enthralled
Totally drawing me in
The power you have over me
Is so very evident
I don't have to ask
You must be aware of it
The one true question is
Is a very simple one
If this lil Southern girl knocks
Are you going to let her in?
Published 11th Oct 2014
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11th Oct 2014 12:33pm
11th Oct 2014 5:42pm
Awe thank you Glen
What a nice thing to say
U r such a gem of a friend darlin
What a nice thing to say
U r such a gem of a friend darlin
11th Oct 2014 12:41pm
I agree with Glen! come on in sweetie
n make yourself comfy my lil southern one! lol
n make yourself comfy my lil southern one! lol
11th Oct 2014 5:43pm
11th Oct 2014 6:05pm
This is a powerful demonstration of the power of words. The sincerity and transparency in your writing is awesome. You, my dear, are clearly one who is willing to take risks...just make sure that he is worth your magnificence.
11th Oct 2014 6:37pm
Oh i have no doubt that he is hun
Question is does he see me as being worthy of him
U r right...i do not shy away from taking risks.
Especially if the reward n the end is him
Question is does he see me as being worthy of him
U r right...i do not shy away from taking risks.
Especially if the reward n the end is him
11th Oct 2014 7:40pm
11th Oct 2014 7:56pm
Only he knows for sure where i stand X
I never assume anything
Glad u enjoy what i do hun
I never assume anything
Glad u enjoy what i do hun
11th Oct 2014 8:50pm
you chose the right title & beguiling artwork for this seductive poem, Belle. there are many here who will be hoping for that knock.
I'd recommend that you be careful, but you're very adventurous...
I'd recommend that you be careful, but you're very adventurous...
11th Oct 2014 9:10pm
I might b an adventurous lil grl
But i assure u Mr Feddeler
I learned along time ago to b very careful
On whose door i knock upon
Im a very selective woman hun
And never tap on more than one hun
Glad u liked my lil write darlin
But i assure u Mr Feddeler
I learned along time ago to b very careful
On whose door i knock upon
Im a very selective woman hun
And never tap on more than one hun
Glad u liked my lil write darlin
Anonymous
12th Oct 2014 7:09am
Waiting for your knock
14th Oct 2014 2:12pm
Sounds interesting and great ink Belle! On part of my side the door is open and stay knowingly that you must not need to knock:)
