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Let It Be Me
When it is satisfaction
That you are searching for
Close your eyes
Tell me....who do you see?
Let it be me
You long for in those moments
During your lustful cravings
Allow me Sir to leave you sated
There isn't anything
I will not do
To make sure
All of your needs are met
Is there any doubt in your mind
That I would not do anything it takes
To please the man that I am with?
There isn't at all
Allow me to be the one
To show you the true meaning of sensuality
Take you past just simple sex
Let me show you how wonderful it can be
When two bodies and souls
Connect as one lone being
All new heights will be met
Please Sir....let it be me to show you the way
That you are searching for
Close your eyes
Tell me....who do you see?
Let it be me
You long for in those moments
During your lustful cravings
Allow me Sir to leave you sated
There isn't anything
I will not do
To make sure
All of your needs are met
Is there any doubt in your mind
That I would not do anything it takes
To please the man that I am with?
There isn't at all
Allow me to be the one
To show you the true meaning of sensuality
Take you past just simple sex
Let me show you how wonderful it can be
When two bodies and souls
Connect as one lone being
All new heights will be met
Please Sir....let it be me to show you the way
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Re: Let It Be Me
11th Oct 2014 7:41pm
To which the male object of the poem should say 'Show me!' Poem climaxes in its final verse.
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re: Re: Let It Be Me
11th Oct 2014 7:49pm
Solomon darlin....i truly hope that he feels the same way
We shall see
Glad u enjoyed it
We shall see
Glad u enjoyed it
Re: Let It Be Me
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11th Oct 2014 7:49pm
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re: Re: Let It Be Me
11th Oct 2014 7:52pm
Re: Let It Be Me
11th Oct 2014 7:52pm
The want and desire in this poem is intense. You really put a lot of feeling into it Belle. I'm sure it will be reciprocated.
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re: Re: Let It Be Me
11th Oct 2014 7:53pm
Re: Let It Be Me
11th Oct 2014 9:35pm
re: Re: Let It Be Me
11th Oct 2014 9:44pm
re: Re: Let It Be Me
11th Oct 2014 10:01pm
Very true Speak darlin
Sometimes we are bound tighter than we honestly realize
Sometimes we are bound tighter than we honestly realize
Re: Let It Be Me
11th Oct 2014 10:43pm
re: Re: Let It Be Me
12th Oct 2014 00:02am
Hmmmmmm.....Glen hun u would have to ask him hun
Im glad u enjoyed my dear friend
Im glad u enjoyed my dear friend
Re: Let It Be Me
11th Oct 2014 10:57pm
Amazing words & I felt them & you in every one you wrote.
I'm sure he does by the way.....
I'm sure he does by the way.....
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re: Re: Let It Be Me
12th Oct 2014 00:04am
Ty darlin im happy my passion shows
I hope u r right n he feels every emotion too
I hope u r right n he feels every emotion too
Re: Let It Be Me
12th Oct 2014 2:23am
Captured the eyes with the silk of your ink
Dripping the hearts blood for all to see
We all can taste the warmth that seeps
We all starve for such flavors of pure blood
Of A lover who feels so deep
Passion filled write Belle
Dripping the hearts blood for all to see
We all can taste the warmth that seeps
We all starve for such flavors of pure blood
Of A lover who feels so deep
Passion filled write Belle
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re: Re: Let It Be Me
13th Oct 2014 7:13pm
I do truly feel things very deeply
Once i allow u in
Its to my soul
Unlike any other u will know
Glad u liked it darlin
Once i allow u in
Its to my soul
Unlike any other u will know
Glad u liked it darlin
Re: Let It Be Me
13th Oct 2014 4:45pm
When connected mind, body and soul the sex is upgraded to an all new level.
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re: Re: Let It Be Me
13th Oct 2014 7:14pm
Re: Let It Be Me
14th Oct 2014 2:29pm
The temptation is great and very intense nervousness is triggered by the moment one reads the poem, especially men surely will never escape to have immoral thoughts. Great ink Belle!
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re: Re: Let It Be Me
16th Oct 2014 4:57pm
Re: Let It Be Me
14th Oct 2014 9:36pm
Shit.. you can show me the way anytime ;)
Seriously though, great wright. I really liked this one. Very intoxicating!
Seriously though, great wright. I really liked this one. Very intoxicating!
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re: Re: Let It Be Me
16th Oct 2014 4:59pm