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In Deep
All weekend long
You were my only thought
Whether awake or asleep
My brain and body caught in a loop
No matter the distraction
It doesn't work
You are ALL encompassing Sir
Sensual food for my soul
My lil fingers seek out
Pleasures I want to find with you
Deeper is never deep enough
To satisfy my needs
I will never be sated
By my own touch
My lust will not be answered
Without your thrust
Now Sir please reach out
With more than your words
Deliver me from this torture
With your mighty sword
You were my only thought
Whether awake or asleep
My brain and body caught in a loop
No matter the distraction
It doesn't work
You are ALL encompassing Sir
Sensual food for my soul
My lil fingers seek out
Pleasures I want to find with you
Deeper is never deep enough
To satisfy my needs
I will never be sated
By my own touch
My lust will not be answered
Without your thrust
Now Sir please reach out
With more than your words
Deliver me from this torture
With your mighty sword
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Re: In Deep
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6th Oct 2014 8:54pm
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6th Oct 2014 10:25pm
Great poem. Seems like you had a great weekend enjoying the sword of pleasure.
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7th Oct 2014 10:16pm
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7th Oct 2014 00:24am
sometimes that passion is hidden so deeply it takes a determined lover to release it, & turn it to fireworks. lusty poetry...
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8th Oct 2014 3:25am
Well darlin i am the type of woman that if those feelings r there i will do whatever it takes to set off those fireworks
Glad u enjoyed my lil write
Glad u enjoyed my lil write
Re: In Deep
7th Oct 2014 2:24am
Are you refuting the idea that the "pen is mightier than the sword?" :) You are right, nothing can equal passionate, mutual love-making. Beautiful piece my dear.
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Re: In Deep
7th Oct 2014 2:23pm
Extremely hot. infact, the completely man will never say no for that inviatation hun:)
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