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Give it to me
Give it to me like you ain't seen me in a while. Go deep in that pussy, make me smile.
Take me to the bed, drop those pants, let me give you head
Deep in my throat shoot your load. Hold me close as I taste you explode. Lovers and best friends. Fill my holes on both ends.
Plow into my pussy so wet, my body takes off like a jet.
Squirting and squirming from passion within. Returning the pleasure, don't let this end.
On my knees my ass you slap. Pound me harder, make my pussy clap.
Screaming for more, give in to my pleading. Give my body what she's needing.
Cunt clinches hard as I soak the bed, a response felt by your pulsing head. You fill me with your bursting orgasm, and again my body goes into a spasm.
Holding tight, your tongue between my lips. With each stroke my pelvis dips.
Both bodies now in release, inside there is a new peace.
A calm created as love juices leak, once again I go weak.
Weak to your love for me, now it doesn't feel like an eternity.
You've touched me and I've touched you. Once again our love feels new.
Take me to the bed, drop those pants, let me give you head
Deep in my throat shoot your load. Hold me close as I taste you explode. Lovers and best friends. Fill my holes on both ends.
Plow into my pussy so wet, my body takes off like a jet.
Squirting and squirming from passion within. Returning the pleasure, don't let this end.
On my knees my ass you slap. Pound me harder, make my pussy clap.
Screaming for more, give in to my pleading. Give my body what she's needing.
Cunt clinches hard as I soak the bed, a response felt by your pulsing head. You fill me with your bursting orgasm, and again my body goes into a spasm.
Holding tight, your tongue between my lips. With each stroke my pelvis dips.
Both bodies now in release, inside there is a new peace.
A calm created as love juices leak, once again I go weak.
Weak to your love for me, now it doesn't feel like an eternity.
You've touched me and I've touched you. Once again our love feels new.
Published 3rd Oct 2014
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10th Oct 2014 4:28pm
You have a nice rhythm in your lines and how you rhyme within the line. The first part of the line keeps up a fast tempo while the second part is allowed to comment on it and slow down the scene. The mixture accentuates each part. In some cases, your more concrete descriptions of the event are in the first section of the line, and the second section is more abstract holding similes and commentaries on emotion. Thus, we can be watching and experiencing the scene from outside and from inside you. It's very grandiose. It could also be a sex guide. It tells a man just what to do :) I would enjoy making love to a woman who could speak your words and be transparent and lovely with her them as you are. It is certainly a poetic coition :) Fantastic!
10th Oct 2014 10:07pm
Thanks for the nice compliments. My writings just come to me and I often finish them quickly
