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Your smile’s a hippopotamus,
With shiny, shiny, sing,
Your toenails purple with denial,
Your eyelids steeped like wings,
A florescent attitude,
A hue against the waves,
A petal from ferociousness,
Wreckless when you sail,
Bound to slip when glaring,
Fashion focused exercise,
Letting love find only pyramids,
Milking dreams so worldly wise.
With shiny, shiny, sing,
Your toenails purple with denial,
Your eyelids steeped like wings,
A florescent attitude,
A hue against the waves,
A petal from ferociousness,
Wreckless when you sail,
Bound to slip when glaring,
Fashion focused exercise,
Letting love find only pyramids,
Milking dreams so worldly wise.
Published 17th Apr 2011
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17th Apr 2011 5:28pm
to understand this. But "shiny, shiny, sing,"...I just can't. Care to explain?
On a lighter note, though, I like your rhythm.
On a lighter note, though, I like your rhythm.
