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3 a.m...

come to bed, she said,
but I can't sleep...what's up..? well
me, obviously...

Written by dartford

(Paul S...)

Published 28th Sep 2014

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Re: 3 a.m...

Anonymous

28th Sep 2014 00:54am

Paul, I like this one. Subtle but not that subtle!

28th Sep 2014 1:15am

perhaps more sarcastic than
subtle..:) but one tends to be
tetchy at three in the morning...

thanks, H...

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Re: 3 a.m...

28th Sep 2014 1:48pm

no sleep,no good

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29th Sep 2014 6:20pm

no sleep, no awakening..:)

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Re: 3 a.m...

28th Sep 2014 3:25pm

reminds me of being in hospital
nurse wakes me up to ask if
I was asleep ... ;)

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29th Sep 2014 6:21pm

I know what I'd have said..:)

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Re: 3 a.m...

29th Sep 2014 2:42am

wake
up
for
slee
py

tyme

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