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My Worlds Disaster
I can see the red flames from afar
smoke rising
slowly growing
causing people to run about
I can hear the yelling and screaming
the crackling of flames
the falling of everything around
I can taste the ash that floats by
the dirt that’s flying up
the wind that’s blowing about
I can feel the ground shake
the wind becoming stronger
every thing's crumbling
every thing's gone
This Is My world
smoke rising
slowly growing
causing people to run about
I can hear the yelling and screaming
the crackling of flames
the falling of everything around
I can taste the ash that floats by
the dirt that’s flying up
the wind that’s blowing about
I can feel the ground shake
the wind becoming stronger
every thing's crumbling
every thing's gone
This Is My world
Published 16th Apr 2011
| Edited 28th Apr 2011
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Anonymous
16th Apr 2011 1:41am
Perhaps a spell-checking is in order here.
Just a few words that I spotted: *Disaster, *Flames, *That's, *Everything, *Becoming
Just a few words that I spotted: *Disaster, *Flames, *That's, *Everything, *Becoming
16th Apr 2011 2:32am
16th Apr 2011 2:35am
Well...I know I didn't read it, because all I saw were the spelling mistakes...edit the bastard.
Anonymous
16th Apr 2011 2:47am
That's why spell check is so easy. You click a button, and it solves all your problems. I'm sure you can figure it out being the "high schooler" that you are.
If I can do it, you can too. Let's not use age as an excuse ;]
If I can do it, you can too. Let's not use age as an excuse ;]
28th Apr 2011 00:13am
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