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the draw back...
this morning, I opened the curtains
to a whole new world
after which they weren't content to be
just curtains anymore...
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25th Sep 2014 1:56am
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25th Sep 2014 2:06am
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25th Sep 2014 12:32pm
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25th Sep 2014 5:10pm
all I know is that if you put a
dozen of 'em together they've
only got one foot between
them...
dozen of 'em together they've
only got one foot between
them...
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25th Sep 2014 7:47pm
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25th Sep 2014 11:10pm
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26th Sep 2014 6:20am
err... you getting morbid
maybe you should stop reading my poems
... though that would make me sad!
:)
maybe you should stop reading my poems
... though that would make me sad!
:)
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Re: the draw back...
25th Sep 2014 1:53am
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25th Sep 2014 1:59am
Re: the draw back...
25th Sep 2014 7:56am
As the saying goes, "How ya gonna keep 'em on the farm when they've seen gay Paris" ...
... Brilliant wit as always Paul S.
... Brilliant wit as always Paul S.
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re: Re: the draw back...
25th Sep 2014 5:07pm
thanks, Lobo, that saying interests
me, guess it's American in
origin, US troops returning from
the war in Europe..?
I've not heard it before, but it
fits the bill..:)
me, guess it's American in
origin, US troops returning from
the war in Europe..?
I've not heard it before, but it
fits the bill..:)
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27th Sep 2014 2:07am
Yes exactly - particularly African American G.I.s who enjoyed great liberties and freedoms in liberated Europe not seen in their own country
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Re: the draw back...
25th Sep 2014 2:09pm
cur'tains wishing to overextend
my illusion
of who
they think
I think
they are.........
nothin but Vexation
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25th Sep 2014 5:13pm
Re: the draw back...
25th Sep 2014 4:23pm
Sometimes they're completely open when they feel the walls are closing in, and then at times, they just shut me out.. :)
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25th Sep 2014 5:15pm