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lies and blood
stolen lie's rage filled
goodbyes broken lives
beaten down freaks
god forgives us all
or sends us down to hell
the bitch dies the fire
burns the pure and leaves sinners
I hope they die I hope they fucking
burn leave nothing pure let them burn
there a fucking sin there morbid bitch's
so burn in hell you fucking whores and assholes
goodbyes broken lives
beaten down freaks
god forgives us all
or sends us down to hell
the bitch dies the fire
burns the pure and leaves sinners
I hope they die I hope they fucking
burn leave nothing pure let them burn
there a fucking sin there morbid bitch's
so burn in hell you fucking whores and assholes
Published 24th Sep 2014
| Edited 28th Sep 2014
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24th Sep 2014 9:12pm
hey,
so I think its a good poem, but from line 6 it get sort of confusing about whether or not you're talking about the lie or lies itself or the person and so I was just having a bit of trouble with that but overall I liked it.
so I think its a good poem, but from line 6 it get sort of confusing about whether or not you're talking about the lie or lies itself or the person and so I was just having a bit of trouble with that but overall I liked it.
