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Love Nest
I have a vision
In my lil head
Of our perfect lil nest
Where we can lay our heads
Some place nice and simple
Nothing fancy at all
Full of the simplest of pleasures
Naturally cozy like me
The first thing needed is our perfect bed
Always wanted an old iron frame
With a feather mattress
That we can get lost in
I can see us now
Tucked away from glaring eyes
You, me and lots of feathers flying
Deep into the night
Oh and of course feather pillows too
Crisp white cotton sheets
Beckoning us to join them
Throughout the night
Open the windows baby
Lets make love to the songs
Sang out by the crickets
On these hot Bama nights
Moon beams licking our skin
Through our sheer curtains
As the breeze
Kisses our lashes and lips
Soothing sighs and moans
The only lullabys needed
When next to you
On OUR featherbed of my dreams
In my lil head
Of our perfect lil nest
Where we can lay our heads
Some place nice and simple
Nothing fancy at all
Full of the simplest of pleasures
Naturally cozy like me
The first thing needed is our perfect bed
Always wanted an old iron frame
With a feather mattress
That we can get lost in
I can see us now
Tucked away from glaring eyes
You, me and lots of feathers flying
Deep into the night
Oh and of course feather pillows too
Crisp white cotton sheets
Beckoning us to join them
Throughout the night
Open the windows baby
Lets make love to the songs
Sang out by the crickets
On these hot Bama nights
Moon beams licking our skin
Through our sheer curtains
As the breeze
Kisses our lashes and lips
Soothing sighs and moans
The only lullabys needed
When next to you
On OUR featherbed of my dreams
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Re: Love Nest
21st Sep 2014 6:56pm
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21st Sep 2014 8:55pm
Thanks hun
Slept n one just like it growin up
Glad u liked my lil write
Slept n one just like it growin up
Glad u liked my lil write
Re: Love Nest
21st Sep 2014 8:40pm
I can see the image in your poem. The cool night with the crickets chirping, the moon shining through the Magnolia trees down into the window, hitting the bed right where you're laying waiting for your love. Great write Belle.
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21st Sep 2014 8:58pm
Thanx X...nothing liked night time here this time of the year.
Opened up all of the windows last night.
Opened up all of the windows last night.
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21st Sep 2014 9:00pm
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21st Sep 2014 9:11pm
If i have soothed a soul today then a good day it has been hun
I consider that quite a compliment
I consider that quite a compliment
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2014 10:31pm
Belle,
Your upbringing sounds much like mine. :-) Nothing better than the simple things in life and love to make it that much more special. Thank you for this glimpse and the awesome visual your words have delivered.
tornado
Your upbringing sounds much like mine. :-) Nothing better than the simple things in life and love to make it that much more special. Thank you for this glimpse and the awesome visual your words have delivered.
tornado
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22nd Sep 2014 00:06am
The one thing i failed to mention to round out my world of perfection was a tin roof.
Glad i seemed to have brought back fond memories for u hun
Glad i seemed to have brought back fond memories for u hun
Re: Love Nest
21st Sep 2014 10:39pm
I love the simplicity of your vision and the awesome imagery of the scene...I can feel the breeze chilling my sweat, hear the symphony of moans and spoken words of love all backed up by the orchestra of crickets (throw in some wind chimes and I'm overcome) The bed all in white a blank canvas to be painted with sensual colors of pure ecstasy.
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22nd Sep 2014 00:10am
GW darlin u r a man who definity seems to get it
Simplicity can b such a beautiful thing
So many things n life r over worked n way too over done
Simplicity can b such a beautiful thing
So many things n life r over worked n way too over done
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22nd Sep 2014 00:40am
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22nd Sep 2014 11:35am
Such a dreamy visual and ink...loving
this magical lil ride into your world of romance
here! :)
this magical lil ride into your world of romance
here! :)
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