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 I lifted my head and saw her face
   So much beauty had filled this place
  The room stood still and became real quiet
   This feeling I had man you should try it
    I told myself this was my shot
 I cleared my head and smoked some pot
   I walked right up with a handful of sweat
   I tell you it was love right when we met
   Her eyes lit up with streaks of blue
 The butterflies I had I swear I flew
    I took her hand and helped her up
  She came with and left her cup
     We went outside and began to talk
   Within seconeds our eyes would lock
    The rest of the night had felt so right
 She didn't want to leave my sight
  The time had come and she had to
leave
   She softly grabbed the top of my sleeve
  She leaned on in and kissed my cheek.
   My knees would buckle and become real weak
   I gave her a hug and she started to leave
   Finally at last I was able to breathe
  As she was leaving she looked back at me
  And that was the moment I knew I had fell in love with Lindsay Lee

                     -loky
  
  
Written by Loky
Published | Edited 22nd Sep 2014
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