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There is Blood
There is blood
The blood I used to write your name
There is blood
The blood I used to write I love you babe
There is blood
The blood I used to write all the things I love about you
There is blood
The blood I used to used to write the letter that sealed the deal
There is blood
The blood I used to write goodbye
There is blood
The last little bit has trickled down my arm
There is no more blood
And I am dead
The blood I used to write your name
There is blood
The blood I used to write I love you babe
There is blood
The blood I used to write all the things I love about you
There is blood
The blood I used to used to write the letter that sealed the deal
There is blood
The blood I used to write goodbye
There is blood
The last little bit has trickled down my arm
There is no more blood
And I am dead
Published 15th Apr 2011
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15th Apr 2011 9:51am
i like the use of repetion to instill emphasis. oh and welcome to the site newbie :D keep writing, and while youre at it check out my poems
14th Jul 2012 11:36am
30th Jan 2013 4:58pm
repetition, repetition, repetition ^^
very nice,
I do dislike the last line though :/
But don't worry, I'm just some stranger and you'll get better ^^
very nice,
I do dislike the last line though :/
But don't worry, I'm just some stranger and you'll get better ^^
