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he told her...

he told her he loved her...
I thought you loved me,
she cried...

Written by dartford

(Paul S...)

Published 19th Sep 2014

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Re: he told her...

hiba

19th Sep 2014 7:20am

What else we can do....women!

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dartford (Paul S...)

20th Sep 2014 11:12pm

oh, hib...I feel bad about
writing it now..:)

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Re: he told her...

Pishashee

19th Sep 2014 9:22am

Sweet write. I love the subtle sensitivity I find in your writings.

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dartford (Paul S...)

20th Sep 2014 11:14pm

I love that you do..:)

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Re: he told her...

dkzksaxxas_DanielX (DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)

19th Sep 2014 11:41pm

such as it is,
perhapsly
it is as such.

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dartford (Paul S...)

20th Sep 2014 11:16pm

it just what it's
not anything
else..:)

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Hashman

20th Sep 2014 1:51am

i thought... :)

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dartford (Paul S...)

20th Sep 2014 11:17pm

wish I had, before opening
my mouth..:)

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