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Loosely Based On A True Story
Broken, angry
How my story used to go
Now I'm happy
To search for more
Find my meaning
Fly into the wild
Now I'm, hungry
Freedom of a child
I found a blank page
I'm ready to write my own ending
Do what I must
Choose who to trust
To make it happen
No more, sorry
No more wasting time,
I must, push on
Cross over the line
Excuses, wasted
This is my new start
All the sadness
I will finally part
I guess I have to thank you for this pool of motivation,
So **** you, and thank you, for boiling my frustration.
I found a blank page
I'm ready to write my own ending
Do what I must
Choose who to trust
To make it happen
And on these pages I will write
My ending loosely based on a true story.
How my story used to go
Now I'm happy
To search for more
Find my meaning
Fly into the wild
Now I'm, hungry
Freedom of a child
I found a blank page
I'm ready to write my own ending
Do what I must
Choose who to trust
To make it happen
No more, sorry
No more wasting time,
I must, push on
Cross over the line
Excuses, wasted
This is my new start
All the sadness
I will finally part
I guess I have to thank you for this pool of motivation,
So **** you, and thank you, for boiling my frustration.
I found a blank page
I'm ready to write my own ending
Do what I must
Choose who to trust
To make it happen
And on these pages I will write
My ending loosely based on a true story.
Published 17th Sep 2014
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19th Sep 2014 10:36am
Dude this is awesome man
It's very moving and passionate
It reminded me of myself
4 years ago I began writing songs and didn't even know what I was doing until a year later I really wrote a lot and I still do
It's like self-therapy
It's very moving and passionate
It reminded me of myself
4 years ago I began writing songs and didn't even know what I was doing until a year later I really wrote a lot and I still do
It's like self-therapy
19th Sep 2014 4:33pm
It's funny you say that because I started around the same time and like you I didn't really know what I was doing. It is like self-therapy. And thanks for the comments, it's definitely one of my better pieces I think.
21st Sep 2014 1:46pm
22nd Sep 2014 4:26am
