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cathartic mindfuck of death

i thought he had misspoken when he said
he loved me more than death itself
i wrinkled my brow in confusion
not quite getting his thought process

he kissed my shoulder and snuggled closer
my back pressed against his chest
i said "you meant more than life right?"
as he began kissing and nibbling my neck

he said "no darling" grinning
while gliding his hands across my flesh
i said "wait how do you love someone more than death
wouldnt that imply you also love death?"

his fingers slithered down my body
then burrowed deep inside my warm wet
he said "mmm i do ...but not as much as i love you"
felt his hardness stiffen as he drew quicken breaths

he said "so do you believe
i love you more than death?"
as he kissed his way down between my thighs
i was tingling but trying to compose myself

his tongue was magic, i almost forgot
what we were discussing
i felt like bubbles floating high
drifting, enthused and bursting

my climax building with each lick
while his fingers explored my innerspace
squirming moaning hips gyrating
my thighs wrapped around his face

i stuttered," but baaaabbbby how..how..
how could anyone love death?
he smiled and said "death is peace,releasing
it is blissful,freeing in and of itself"

felt myself slipping as i began
twitching and writhing in exctasy
i was shivering on the verge
by the time he climbed on top of me

he said " but life is torture
unrelenting, absolute sheer misery "
finally got his meaning when he started grinning
stopped and asked "so how much do you love me"

torments coursed thru me
my body was beggin  for release
panting... i whispered "more than death"
but my eyes said ohhh baby please

ecstatic tension started creeping up my spine
this man was literally trying to blow my mind
then we began grinding and climax together
explosively cathartic and divine

he said he'd rather live for me
but that he would easily to die for me
snuggled closer saying "damn i love death"
drifting half sleep i said "mmmmmhmmm me too baby"
dammit smh, i love that i hate that i LOVE it when he do that shit to me!!!! :)

***inspired by two weeks by fka twigs*** well partly :)
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