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Who I be
I was who I was
When I did all that
When I live like
I wanted none of today:
Puffing
Sniffing
Sipping, gulping
Chewing
I was…
I be who I be today
Changed
Educated
Say what you may
Tomorrow, I will
To be who I will.
When I did all that
When I live like
I wanted none of today:
Puffing
Sniffing
Sipping, gulping
Chewing
I was…
I be who I be today
Changed
Educated
Say what you may
Tomorrow, I will
To be who I will.
Published 14th Apr 2011
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14th Apr 2011 9:48pm
21st Apr 2011 8:20am
Anonymous
15th Apr 2011 3:47pm
You've weaved an elegant symphone here with your clever use of language and syntax. The meaning is executed with grace and finesse. A charming, crunchy piece of verse.
21st Apr 2011 8:22am
Jack, Thanks. The word crunchy in your comment make me feel like chewing it.
3rd May 2011 9:18am
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