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Don't break me
It’s hard to describe
The heat that sits in my chest
I cannot say I love you,
Because it’s not enough anymore.
It seems to me I've fallen
And tumbled all the way down
I didn’t expect you with me
Nor the ‘togetherness’ we’ve found.
Just...
Please don’t break me
I’m a firefly of brightness
All that I am is for you
Please don’t break me
I wouldn’t know what to do...
You’re the most beautiful soul
The way you give is magic
All the sunsets I want with you
Even when old age sets in...
Just...
Please don’t break me
I’m a firefly of brightness
All that I am is for you
Please don’t break me
I wouldn’t know what to do...
I don’t see my life without you x
The heat that sits in my chest
I cannot say I love you,
Because it’s not enough anymore.
It seems to me I've fallen
And tumbled all the way down
I didn’t expect you with me
Nor the ‘togetherness’ we’ve found.
Just...
Please don’t break me
I’m a firefly of brightness
All that I am is for you
Please don’t break me
I wouldn’t know what to do...
You’re the most beautiful soul
The way you give is magic
All the sunsets I want with you
Even when old age sets in...
Just...
Please don’t break me
I’m a firefly of brightness
All that I am is for you
Please don’t break me
I wouldn’t know what to do...
I don’t see my life without you x
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Re: Don't break me
Anonymous
15th Sep 2014 1:33am
What a piece of soul writing at its best! I luv this and can relate. I pray that he sees how precious your soul is. How much you truly feel inside your heart. Brilliant!! RL for me. Xo :)
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15th Sep 2014 3:51am
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15th Sep 2014 2:33am
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Re: Don't break me
15th Sep 2014 6:42am
For me I sense almost contradictory currents; on one hand the rush of romantic love but yet the reluctance to be injured.
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re: Re: Don't break me
15th Sep 2014 7:21am
Indeed; it is a rush of romantic love, one most definitely unexpected... now a little frightened of the vulnerability you experience. Most happy to do so :)
Thank you x
Thank you x
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Re: Don't break me
15th Sep 2014 4:53pm
I can't say it's never gonna happen
becuz who knows the curves life is gonna
hit you with,but I can say wooooow ur ink is very emotionally
affecting :)
becuz who knows the curves life is gonna
hit you with,but I can say wooooow ur ink is very emotionally
affecting :)
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re: Re: Don't break me
16th Sep 2014 00:30am
Exactly, no one knows; however sometimes you just hope you do... I'm a big softy, thank you for your lovely comments x
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21st Jan 2015 00:33am
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Re. Don't break me
19th Mar 2016 10:50pm
Touching - if that was said to me I would want to live out the gentleness wanted.
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