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Tomorrow Shores
The ocean wants for no salt nor water.
Shed tears to empty yourself,
not to fill vast seas.
Sit upon this spray-kissed rock
and wait for the horizon ship
that sweeps past on rolling waves.
It takes you to tomorrow shores
where fire-gold souls dance
and tame the darkness.
Published 14th Sep 2014
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Anonymous
14th Sep 2014 8:28pm
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14th Sep 2014 9:41pm
Shed tears to empty yourself,
not to fill vast seas
couldn't agree more. what a beautiful write, so short yet so full
not to fill vast seas
couldn't agree more. what a beautiful write, so short yet so full
14th Sep 2014 9:58pm
14th Sep 2014 11:40pm
where fire-gold souls dance
and tame the darkness.
This alone conjures so much beauty and reclaimed strength
and tame the darkness.
This alone conjures so much beauty and reclaimed strength
15th Sep 2014 00:46am
Anonymous
15th Sep 2014 1:25am
This touches the soul deeply.
Anonymous
15th Sep 2014 7:02am
Yes, please! take me there!!!
Anonymous
15th Sep 2014 12:22pm
this is lovely, a thought penned beautifully with visual treats that add to the depth overall. Shine on, Atakti :) well done
15th Sep 2014 11:58pm
"oh,father of the four winds,fill my sails,across the sea of years"(LedZep)...(wonderful words)
24th Sep 2014 10:24am
