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Still
For CY
I don't know where this is headed
Just opened up
This page
Feel compelled
To
Write
Put
Words
Upon
The slate
Wait...
.
.
.
What's running
Through
(Threw? Is it strewn too?)
My
Head?
AND
By
All
That's
Earthly
Why
Aren't
I
Stlll
Abed?
Can't get a good night's sleep
No matter how
I try
No amount of toying with
My pussy
Quiets
What
You
Awoke
Could the answer then be so simple?
Your words remain with me
Still
"And shall I kiss your hungry mouth and pinch your naughty little clit to feel you cry out into me?"
I need your touch, my love
All that I am clamors
For thy will
I don't know where this is headed
Just opened up
This page
Feel compelled
To
Write
Put
Words
Upon
The slate
Wait...
.
.
.
What's running
Through
(Threw? Is it strewn too?)
My
Head?
AND
By
All
That's
Earthly
Why
Aren't
I
Stlll
Abed?
Can't get a good night's sleep
No matter how
I try
No amount of toying with
My pussy
Quiets
What
You
Awoke
Could the answer then be so simple?
Your words remain with me
Still
"And shall I kiss your hungry mouth and pinch your naughty little clit to feel you cry out into me?"
I need your touch, my love
All that I am clamors
For thy will
Published 14th Sep 2014
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Anonymous
14th Sep 2014 7:13am
Ah! When masturbation has lost all its panache to a lovers sensual whisper, what to do, what to do. I know I'd scream at him for killing it! Brilliant write for a late night, Miss Savaja. May your love join you soon;). . .xo, Devlin.
20th Sep 2014 5:49am
Thank you very much, Devlin, luv :-*!
He is a crafty man, that one, knows just how to keep me on tenterhooks awaiting his pleasure... ;-*
He is a crafty man, that one, knows just how to keep me on tenterhooks awaiting his pleasure... ;-*
14th Sep 2014 7:35am
I know, all too well, of late night yearnings you have captured that frustration very well my dear. Thank you!
20th Sep 2014 5:51am
You are welcome, Gahddess_Worship, luv :-*!
And, thank you in turn for coming to read, luv, and for the praise. :-*
And, thank you in turn for coming to read, luv, and for the praise. :-*
Late night and early morning callings can be vivid and painful ... Unbearable even. You've captured the spirit of the ghost known as a lover well here Savaja
20th Sep 2014 5:53am
Thank you very much, LobodeSanPedro, luv :-*!
Those ghostly lover's spirits can be tormenting, indeed, eh? ;-*
Those ghostly lover's spirits can be tormenting, indeed, eh? ;-*
Anonymous
14th Sep 2014 8:10am
Good stuff Savaja, lot of good lines and flow
20th Sep 2014 5:56am
Thank you, SugarSkull, luv :-*!
I do rather adore when you come by and tell me of my rhymes and flow, even when you bring awareness where I had no conscious thought of it. :-*. Thank you, luv.
I do rather adore when you come by and tell me of my rhymes and flow, even when you bring awareness where I had no conscious thought of it. :-*. Thank you, luv.
Anonymous
14th Sep 2014 9:10am
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Merci beaucoup, Monsieur Gabriel, luv :-*!
J'adore que tu visite aqui et escrivir. :-*
(Je comprends que mon français est terrible. Pardon moi, por favor.)
Tu est adorable. ;-*
J'adore que tu visite aqui et escrivir. :-*
(Je comprends que mon français est terrible. Pardon moi, por favor.)
Tu est adorable. ;-*
14th Sep 2014 9:25am
20th Sep 2014 6:05am
Thank you for coming by, GeniusGirl, luv :-*!
Ahhh, Kate, I understand, luv. II understand. My primary and I live in different states... :-p
Ahhh, Kate, I understand, luv. II understand. My primary and I live in different states... :-p
14th Sep 2014 2:47pm
Normally, just a word or touch solves this dilemma, if you are so fortunate as to have him (her)close.
20th Sep 2014 6:08am
Thank you, hawkdude, luv, for your understanding. :-*
Normally, that is the case; however, we are not so fortunate... :-p
I rather adore the sensitivity your comment displays, luv. :-*
Normally, that is the case; however, we are not so fortunate... :-p
I rather adore the sensitivity your comment displays, luv. :-*
14th Sep 2014 3:04pm
20th Sep 2014 6:09am
JAZZMANOR, luv :-* ~
You have paid me such a tremendous compliment! Thank you very, very much! ;-*
You have paid me such a tremendous compliment! Thank you very, very much! ;-*
14th Sep 2014 3:36pm
Wweeee-You!! lol
Damn, talk about hott smh
this was really some
Awesome, "spillage" lol
Damn, talk about hott smh
this was really some
Awesome, "spillage" lol
20th Sep 2014 6:11am
Ahhh, Erotic ninja, luv :-* ~
Thank you very much! I am always elated when you find my poetry spicy, luv, for you fair set me aflame... ;-*
Thank you very much! I am always elated when you find my poetry spicy, luv, for you fair set me aflame... ;-*
14th Sep 2014 8:01pm
20th Sep 2014 6:13am
Thank you, xmar82, luv :-*!
Restless nights, indeed. Too, too true. You are the master of the concise statement, Sir. ;-*
Restless nights, indeed. Too, too true. You are the master of the concise statement, Sir. ;-*
15th Sep 2014 11:39pm
20th Sep 2014 6:15am
Oh, Hashman, luv :-*!
You have me blushing and catching my breath at the same time, you know... ;-*
You have me blushing and catching my breath at the same time, you know... ;-*
