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unbroken
rapaciously I saunter through winters rain
you're always wandering away with my logic
to peculiar places where atypic love nymphs hide
once only revealed in the reflection
of derelict dream pools
kept in my heart
and in my mind
innately drawn to your dark
I ache to share clandestine thoughts
against the pale of your collar
at peace in the dusk
our hearts twilight embrace
it's as if we've always been together
like some timeless quantum connection
emitting a warm feeling of familiarity
disrupting endless adumbral patterns
that keep us broken
to: katja winter mikhailov, my love...
you're always wandering away with my logic
to peculiar places where atypic love nymphs hide
once only revealed in the reflection
of derelict dream pools
kept in my heart
and in my mind
innately drawn to your dark
I ache to share clandestine thoughts
against the pale of your collar
at peace in the dusk
our hearts twilight embrace
it's as if we've always been together
like some timeless quantum connection
emitting a warm feeling of familiarity
disrupting endless adumbral patterns
that keep us broken
to: katja winter mikhailov, my love...
Written by
DiscipleofLife
(Fenom)
Published 12th Sep 2014
| Edited 29th Apr 2015
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Re: unbroken
13th Sep 2014 00:49am
there you go again, writing
beautiful poems that I really admire
and could never aspire to..:)
seriously, this is just so
good...
beautiful poems that I really admire
and could never aspire to..:)
seriously, this is just so
good...
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Re: unbroken
13th Sep 2014 00:53am
What a beautifully dark poem to your love! And your voice suits for reading the poem! Nice write, good work!
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13th Sep 2014 1:13am
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2014 2:06am
Have Mercy!! My heart is stunned to speak upon such beauty of your luv for her shown here. Absolutely Beautiful!! Xo :)
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Re: unbroken
13th Sep 2014 2:09am
Re: unbroken
Oh, Fireglacier, luv :-* ~
Truly, you and Snowcrystal, indeed. I really feel old gods at work here, luv... :-*
Such intense love and more yet between the two of thee.
This poem is magnificent, luv, and feels so much a foretelling of sorts.
I require sleep and perhaps I should cease reading old tomes... ;-p
Truly, you and Snowcrystal, indeed. I really feel old gods at work here, luv... :-*
Such intense love and more yet between the two of thee.
This poem is magnificent, luv, and feels so much a foretelling of sorts.
I require sleep and perhaps I should cease reading old tomes... ;-p
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13th Sep 2014 7:07am
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2014 7:03am
that lucky bitch...
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jokes aside, this is beautifully written Eddie
"like some timeless quantum connection
emitting a warm feeling of familiarity"
you always display an unmatched level of erudition that appeals to my sapiosexual nature.
& that voice... lordi lawd have mercy, i love that delicious growl.
you humble me with this piece, darling & you honor me with your affection.
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jokes aside, this is beautifully written Eddie
"like some timeless quantum connection
emitting a warm feeling of familiarity"
you always display an unmatched level of erudition that appeals to my sapiosexual nature.
& that voice... lordi lawd have mercy, i love that delicious growl.
you humble me with this piece, darling & you honor me with your affection.
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Re: unbroken
I'm the one that's honored, my love. You're amazing, and you pose one problem... You're an ineffable muse...
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2nd Oct 2014 7:11am
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2014 8:40am
The language of Love.....such genuine poetry.
Much admired!!!
Much admired!!!
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13th Sep 2014 9:28am
Re: unbroken
14th Sep 2014 2:05am
the love has always been there, in repose, waiting for the lovers to meet. you're always comfortable in this neighborhood...
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14th Sep 2014 3:26am
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15th Sep 2014 4:41pm