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Revealed
Revealed my writing to,
my best friend last night, who
might now think I'm crazy.
But I know that, just maybe,
she might actually enjoy it,
and tell me it's not shit.
(LTM)
my best friend last night, who
might now think I'm crazy.
But I know that, just maybe,
she might actually enjoy it,
and tell me it's not shit.
(LTM)
Published 11th Sep 2014
| Edited 13th Nov 2014
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11th Sep 2014 2:02pm
You have to come clean eventually
Hope she liked because you are a good writer
I like !!!
LTM, yes
Hope she liked because you are a good writer
I like !!!
LTM, yes
11th Sep 2014 2:14pm
12th Sep 2014 00:39am
It's not shit that's for sure ifshe... :)
But that moment when you reveal it is scary...
But that moment when you reveal it is scary...
12th Sep 2014 2:06am
Anonymous
12th Sep 2014 4:25pm
I know how ya feel man. I've shown my writing to a few friends over the years n most of em don't even read it to be honest.
I guess ya gotta be rich and successful first before some will give you the time...
Nice work mang, excited to read more
I guess ya gotta be rich and successful first before some will give you the time...
Nice work mang, excited to read more
13th Sep 2014 4:56am
13th Sep 2014 10:14am
13th Sep 2014 1:27pm
