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Mesmerizing
Your beauty is mesmerizing
Holds my imagination captive
To be speechless like a statue
I must be so in love with you
I want to make you laugh, like a child
Amazed by all the wondrous charms
Your green eyes are mesmerizing
A glance leaves me weak at knees
Just a devoted follower of your lust
In tune with your amazing heart
I want you to dance, like a child
Swirl with you till the end of time
Your red lips are mesmerizing
Kiss me sweetly, to feel just right
Holding your body so close to mine
I must be the luckiest man alive
I want to kiss you passionately, just once
To lose in each other's warmth for life
Published 10th Sep 2014
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10th Sep 2014 8:17pm
For this one, I would like to use the word "mesmerize", which is a strange word for me, but I love the sound and the etymology!
Thank you for your visit, Pishashee, and your nice comment!
Thank you for your visit, Pishashee, and your nice comment!
10th Sep 2014 10:28pm
Wow. Sweet, heartfelt, beautiful. Can't help but smile at such sweet love.
10th Sep 2014 10:35pm
11th Sep 2014 5:33am
Very nice poem Malin, now mesmerizing has become my new fav word as well :)
will you record it?
will you record it?
Vee, I am mesmerized by your nice comment!!! Yes, I wish to record it this weekend and make a little video with... A good work to speak correctly in English. Thank you again for your support and your help, Vee!
I just understand why I love this word : the etymology is very surprising. A German physician, Franz Anton Mesmer (1734-1815), developped a theory about animals magnetism. And french people called that "mesmérisme". Then UK and US people used this french word for the method or power of gaining control over someone's personality or actions, as in hypnosis or suggestion! And a verb has been created "to mesmerize"... but in French, the verb has never been created and I never heard about this word before! (it was my little lesson of etymology of this time)
I just understand why I love this word : the etymology is very surprising. A German physician, Franz Anton Mesmer (1734-1815), developped a theory about animals magnetism. And french people called that "mesmérisme". Then UK and US people used this french word for the method or power of gaining control over someone's personality or actions, as in hypnosis or suggestion! And a verb has been created "to mesmerize"... but in French, the verb has never been created and I never heard about this word before! (it was my little lesson of etymology of this time)
13th Sep 2014 00:49am
13th Sep 2014 00:57am
So funny, Fenom, in the same time, I was commenting your last poem "broken" I love it! Thank you so much for your comment! I am trying to do a new version with video of this poem!
