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breathless did you undertake
the fears of those for Your own sake?
how many hearts must You break
to see Yourself in his eyes?
how much angst must he endure?
what percentage is finally pure
enough to know You're truly sure
to see Yourself in his mind?
can You believe just for a day?
what more does he have to say?
or is the price too great to pay
to see Yourself in his heart?
how much more must he write
for You to keep him in Your sight?
or is it just not worth the fight
to see Yourself in his soul?
Published 2nd Nov 2009
| Edited 23rd Jul 2016
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Anonymous
2nd Nov 2009 11:28am
i like the passion , the anger in this, the capitalisation makes sense. good one
5th Nov 2009 2:02am
thank you both for your comments. i must admit that i was a bit apprehensive about sharing my writing online, but it's really not so scary after all. btw, i've taken a look at both of your works, and i am humbled. great stuff. really.
5th Nov 2009 4:34am
the way you convey what one is willing to do... and how it can make another feel
19th Sep 2011 3:37am
there's a lot of truth behind this. We are often to apprehensive to act upon our feelings and we often miss opportunities
Anonymous
15th Mar 2013 8:31pm
Wow! This has spoken to me on a personal level. Thank you for sharing. :)
