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tremors
shak
ing
can't bling
I trem
stop
what pened
hap Love
to
this all
is Her?
for
Published 5th Nov 2009
| Edited 23rd Oct 2017
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5th Nov 2009 4:31am
5th Nov 2009 3:24pm
5th Nov 2009 8:41pm
im impressed!
its so peculiar and such a different way of writing a poem!
cooolll
its so peculiar and such a different way of writing a poem!
cooolll
7th Nov 2009 7:53pm
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10th Nov 2009 4:25am
thank you so much for your comments everyone. to be honest, i almost didn't post this one. i thought it may have been too out there.
13th Nov 2009 1:09pm
reminds me of her play "4.48 psychosis"... during the serial sevens where the numbers were all splayed out
i love it. it's crazy, definitely shows the distortions of a mind intoxicated.
i love it. it's crazy, definitely shows the distortions of a mind intoxicated.
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