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A limerick-ish 'bout Jim
Entered in The first trophy comp ")
Jim Croce was a soulful man
his words could turn a white girl tan!
he sang songs from his heart
time in a bottle was smart
and I am his number one fan!
Maybe this one's the charm.
wish me luck Jim*
Jim Croce was a soulful man
his words could turn a white girl tan!
he sang songs from his heart
time in a bottle was smart
and I am his number one fan!
Maybe this one's the charm.
wish me luck Jim*
Published 8th Sep 2014
| Edited 12th Feb 2019
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8th Sep 2014 6:03am
8th Sep 2014 6:11am
He sure was I loved his music SB
thanks for the read and visit and positiveness!
Thank you,,,
Broom ")
thanks for the read and visit and positiveness!
Thank you,,,
Broom ")
8th Sep 2014 6:20am
8th Sep 2014 6:24am
a lot of people only know the popular tunes but i like stuff like a good time man like me ain't got no business and wish i could shimmy like my sister kate..... and operator is timeless.......
he def was an italian brotha with soul on a six string acoustic in a time when that was much needed.
well done broom...
i dig it mam....
he def was an italian brotha with soul on a six string acoustic in a time when that was much needed.
well done broom...
i dig it mam....
8th Sep 2014 7:40am
ah yes like Operator, I got a name, he was amazing!
Thanks for the visit Jr. and i was on a ban so i couldn't congratulate you on the win in Madame's comp last week ")
Congrats btw!
Thanks for the visit Jr. and i was on a ban so i couldn't congratulate you on the win in Madame's comp last week ")
Congrats btw!
8th Sep 2014 11:23pm
I love that guy... Musically gifted he was...
This was short, but sweet :)
P.S. I of course know
the length of this
was intentional lol
This was short, but sweet :)
P.S. I of course know
the length of this
was intentional lol
8th Sep 2014 11:39pm
Definition of Limericks
Limericks are short sometimes bawdy, humorous poems of consisting of five Anapaestic lines. Lines 1, 2, and 5 of a Limerick have seven to ten syllables and rhyme with one another. Lines 3 and 4 have five to seven syllables and also rhyme with each other. Edward Lear is famous for his Book of Nonsense which included the poetry form of Limericks.
Thought you might like to know "D
Glad you like Ode to Jim
(((((((((((((((Po))))))))))
Broomie :)
Limericks are short sometimes bawdy, humorous poems of consisting of five Anapaestic lines. Lines 1, 2, and 5 of a Limerick have seven to ten syllables and rhyme with one another. Lines 3 and 4 have five to seven syllables and also rhyme with each other. Edward Lear is famous for his Book of Nonsense which included the poetry form of Limericks.
Thought you might like to know "D
Glad you like Ode to Jim
(((((((((((((((Po))))))))))
Broomie :)
10th Sep 2014 00:28am
10th Sep 2014 1:12am
12th Sep 2014 11:22pm
12th Sep 2014 11:39pm
We have a lot in common from where I sit!
Glad you liked and I'm glad I gave you a little nostalgia!
Hugs
Jackie ")
Glad you liked and I'm glad I gave you a little nostalgia!
Hugs
Jackie ")
13th Sep 2014 4:16am
13th Sep 2014 5:27am
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- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
27th Sep 2017 9:59pm
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Speaking of limericks, or near-limericks.... :-)
"Well the South side of Chicago
Is the baddest part of town
And if you go down there
You better just beware
Of a man named Leroy Brown
...
He got a custom Continental
He got an El Dorado too
He got a 32 gun
in his pocket for fun
He got a razor in his shoe
...
Well Friday 'bout a week ago
Leroy... ... shootin' dice
And at the edge of the bar
Sat a girl named Dor[is]
And oh that girl looked nice"
--------
Also...
"If I could save time in a bottle
The first thing that I'd like to do
Is to save every day
'til eternity passes away
Just to spend them with you
...
If I had a box just for wishes
And dreams that had never come true
The box would be empty
Except for the memory
of how they were answered by you"
Not "perfect" limerick metre and rhymes, but AABBA form.
"Well the South side of Chicago
Is the baddest part of town
And if you go down there
You better just beware
Of a man named Leroy Brown
...
He got a custom Continental
He got an El Dorado too
He got a 32 gun
in his pocket for fun
He got a razor in his shoe
...
Well Friday 'bout a week ago
Leroy... ... shootin' dice
And at the edge of the bar
Sat a girl named Dor[is]
And oh that girl looked nice"
--------
Also...
"If I could save time in a bottle
The first thing that I'd like to do
Is to save every day
'til eternity passes away
Just to spend them with you
...
If I had a box just for wishes
And dreams that had never come true
The box would be empty
Except for the memory
of how they were answered by you"
Not "perfect" limerick metre and rhymes, but AABBA form.
11th Oct 2022 11:27pm
Wow hello :) feels good to read this.
Indeed i enjoyed writing this and am happy someone knows what a Limerick consists of
Thanks again Matt 🤗♥️
Jackie
Indeed i enjoyed writing this and am happy someone knows what a Limerick consists of
Thanks again Matt 🤗♥️
Jackie
