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Empty Sheets
Just woke up.....
I was dreaming once again
My head full of visions
Can't get you out of there
Without thinking I reach over
Of course, you are not there
Just a lonely pillow
Where you should be
Cool, crisp sheets waiting
To wrap around you each night
With my lil arm and legs
Draped across you too
Drifting off in your arms
Ahhh, would be a dream come true
Just me and you
Tucked away in my bedroom
Sweet dreams
I was dreaming once again
My head full of visions
Can't get you out of there
Without thinking I reach over
Of course, you are not there
Just a lonely pillow
Where you should be
Cool, crisp sheets waiting
To wrap around you each night
With my lil arm and legs
Draped across you too
Drifting off in your arms
Ahhh, would be a dream come true
Just me and you
Tucked away in my bedroom
Sweet dreams
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Re: Empty Sheets
4th Sep 2014 7:05am
very well written piece. I can easily relate to yearning for someone I love to be by my side only to find emptiness. It's always like reopening a barely healed wound. Thanks for sharing.
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4th Sep 2014 7:23am
Thank you Raven hun
Im sure if we r honest with ourselves at some point we have ALL been there
Hugs
Belle
Im sure if we r honest with ourselves at some point we have ALL been there
Hugs
Belle
Re: Empty Sheets
4th Sep 2014 11:30am
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4th Sep 2014 12:20pm
Sometimes a dream is all that we get.
Hope u had sweet dreams atleast hun
I did
Hope u had sweet dreams atleast hun
I did
Re: Empty Sheets
4th Sep 2014 11:48am
Damn... Yea I can feel the emptiness
n the desire... Well done sweetheart :)
n the desire... Well done sweetheart :)
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re: Re: Empty Sheets
4th Sep 2014 12:21pm
Not totally empty sir....
Even though hes not here i feel his warmth
Hugs
Belle
Even though hes not here i feel his warmth
Hugs
Belle
Re: Empty Sheets
4th Sep 2014 2:45pm
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4th Sep 2014 3:20pm
Re: Empty Sheets
Anonymous
4th Sep 2014 4:55pm
hey my dear belle
yes like it when it's
"Just me and you
Tucked away in my bedroom "
Simple and effective :)
yes like it when it's
"Just me and you
Tucked away in my bedroom "
Simple and effective :)
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re: Re: Empty Sheets
4th Sep 2014 5:50pm
Re: Empty Sheets
Wistful longing piece, favourite verses three and four. The Police's 1980s song 'The Bed's too big without you' would make a yearning background song to a reading of this.
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4th Sep 2014 9:22pm
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4th Sep 2014 8:38pm
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4th Sep 2014 9:26pm
My thats quite the intoxicating comment darlin
Thanx for popping in and giving it a read
Hugs
Belle
Thanx for popping in and giving it a read
Hugs
Belle
Re: Empty Sheets
Anonymous
4th Sep 2014 10:18pm
Belle,
Amazing how big sheets can get, especially when you're looking for someone. Nice write of longing!
tornado
Amazing how big sheets can get, especially when you're looking for someone. Nice write of longing!
tornado
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re: Re: Empty Sheets
8th Sep 2014 8:18pm
Yea...they seem to grow at times.
As lil as i am this king size bed is already big enough as it is
Glad u enjoyed it
As lil as i am this king size bed is already big enough as it is
Glad u enjoyed it
Re: Empty Sheets
5th Sep 2014 2:01pm
Wrapped up in sheets and awaiting the bliss of a morning luv. R u sure it was a dream?
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re: Re: Empty Sheets
8th Sep 2014 8:20pm
It had to b Hawk cuz i was completely alone darlin
Atleast it was a sweet dream though
Atleast it was a sweet dream though