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Have You Ever Gone Insane?
Have you ever gone insane?
Felt bare knuckles to wall rage
Dared the mother fucker in the sky
To blast you to kindom come.
Have you felt the pain of loss?
Lost your mind in a twisted maze
You couldn't find your way out of
Demons mocking you on the t.v.
To your face
Lost your job to paranoia
Relegated to poverty though you're smart as hell.
I don't pity myself rage keeps me alive
I don't need eyes to see in the dark
This is the plane I exist on I feed on the fire
It's my mainstay.
Insanity not asked for or desired
I write because this is therapy
A way to exorcise my demons
That feed off my soul
As a sucubus does
Injecting my veins with heroin
Since I was seventeen
All to self medicate
I've since kicked that demon's ass
Yes I have some class.
Have you walked in my shoes?
Is life for you all fucking roses?
Well bravo for you
Take a walk in your brother's shoes
Before you stick your nose in the air
Have some fucking heart
If there is any there.
Felt bare knuckles to wall rage
Dared the mother fucker in the sky
To blast you to kindom come.
Have you felt the pain of loss?
Lost your mind in a twisted maze
You couldn't find your way out of
Demons mocking you on the t.v.
To your face
Lost your job to paranoia
Relegated to poverty though you're smart as hell.
I don't pity myself rage keeps me alive
I don't need eyes to see in the dark
This is the plane I exist on I feed on the fire
It's my mainstay.
Insanity not asked for or desired
I write because this is therapy
A way to exorcise my demons
That feed off my soul
As a sucubus does
Injecting my veins with heroin
Since I was seventeen
All to self medicate
I've since kicked that demon's ass
Yes I have some class.
Have you walked in my shoes?
Is life for you all fucking roses?
Well bravo for you
Take a walk in your brother's shoes
Before you stick your nose in the air
Have some fucking heart
If there is any there.
Published 12th Apr 2011
| Edited 26th Aug 2015
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12th Apr 2011 9:25pm
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12th Apr 2011 10:55pm
powerful lines (pardon the pun)well done on all levels crims
insanity ;
in a mad world only the insane are sane.
have walked in my brothers shoes and then sold them shoes, his watch,phone e.t.c
dont know about you but sometimes i think "if this
is the reality that i've been missing i am glad i missed so much of it"
fair play for having the strength to live.
insanity ;
in a mad world only the insane are sane.
have walked in my brothers shoes and then sold them shoes, his watch,phone e.t.c
dont know about you but sometimes i think "if this
is the reality that i've been missing i am glad i missed so much of it"
fair play for having the strength to live.
12th Apr 2011 11:07pm
Thank you Lepperochan I loved what you said about having walked in your brother's shoes sold them etc lol that was great..made me smile..peace Crim
Anonymous
12th Apr 2011 11:22pm
Very powerful. Inspiring. Rebellious.
Take your pick. :]
And, I agree with Holdit. Most of us already are insane. [At least I am]
Take your pick. :]
And, I agree with Holdit. Most of us already are insane. [At least I am]
13th Apr 2011 00:52am
Thank you Cori for the encouraging comment..I think half the great poets are insane..not that I would count myself among them..but you know lol..thank you again peace Crim
Anonymous
13th Apr 2011 2:23am
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13th Apr 2011 2:29am
You gave me something to ponder..yes I guess we are emotional creatures poets..peace Crim
13th Apr 2011 6:09am
Have you ever gone insane?
Felt bare knuckles to wall rage
Dared the mother fucker in the sky
To blast you to kindom come.
Have you felt the pain of loss?
Lost your mind in a twisted maze"
fuious intro...kept up the angry pace...insanities a muse embrace it
Felt bare knuckles to wall rage
Dared the mother fucker in the sky
To blast you to kindom come.
Have you felt the pain of loss?
Lost your mind in a twisted maze"
fuious intro...kept up the angry pace...insanities a muse embrace it
13th Apr 2011 6:30am
thank you..for the beautiful comment..I will embrace it..thank you again for the encouragement..peace Crim
18th Apr 2011 10:19pm
"Mocking demons" "lost job to paranoia" all to well known to me this was just what I needed
Thank you for the kind comment and add to your reading list..sorry to hear you have been through this as well..peace Crim
20th Apr 2011 6:12am
Powerful stuff! An angered emotion clearly emits from every word of this. You are right, writing can be a way to exercise the demons of the mind. The trick is not to give up your soul to those demons, losing your mind is one thing and anyone can do it, getting back your soul is damn near impossible. I shall have to read more of your work but I like what I see so far.
20th Apr 2011 6:18am
Thank you yes i've been very angry I felt demons took control of my life and cost me my sanity..thank you for the beautiful comment and advise..peace Crim
