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Together
Don't kill yourself you say
It'll get better in time you say
Well i'm all out of time my dear.
And it seems that death,
is the way to get a more.
If i had time i would spend it all on you.
We'd walk down memory lane,
together, hand in hand,heart to heart
And i'd show you all the pain in this land.
We'll lose our souls in the sands of time,
come join me dearest,it's not a crime.
I'll make you see
how bad life can be.
Then we'll kiss and you will see,
how wonderful it is with me.
So take my hand and we'll embark on this journey,
together my love
It'll get better in time you say
Well i'm all out of time my dear.
And it seems that death,
is the way to get a more.
If i had time i would spend it all on you.
We'd walk down memory lane,
together, hand in hand,heart to heart
And i'd show you all the pain in this land.
We'll lose our souls in the sands of time,
come join me dearest,it's not a crime.
I'll make you see
how bad life can be.
Then we'll kiss and you will see,
how wonderful it is with me.
So take my hand and we'll embark on this journey,
together my love
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awww
12th Apr 2011 7:57pm
re: awww
12th Apr 2011 7:59pm
my only really really close friend,she hates when i cut and when she found out i almost killed myself twice last week she got pissed,admitted she loves me and cares for me. I cried and wrote this poem. I've done better but it meant alot to her that i wrote it.
Benji
12th Apr 2011 8:09pm
I'm glad you have a friend who inspires you to go on and not give in to cutting..peace Crim
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re: Benji
12th Apr 2011 8:10pm
well she tries to at least. whenever i'm pissed or uhm,suicidal i call her and she somehow manages to keep me alive in this hell we call life
aw
12th Apr 2011 8:22pm
very sweet...ur frend nd those around you shud feel very thankfull nd lucky that you r alive or even existing in the world of lies known as life..you are a very talented poet nd great person...keep writing!!!
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re: aw
13th Apr 2011 5:59pm
re: re: aw
14th Apr 2011 2:14am
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Ok enough with the dying we both know your talented that's something to live for.. I like the poem it's good but a cry for help again and that's not good so let's write about how you are going to overcome and show them you will be better :) Good one sweetie
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re: ...
13th Apr 2011 5:58pm
same
12th Apr 2011 9:26pm
there always seems to be that friend that can get us out of our moods that some of us seem to have every no and then.
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re: same
14th Apr 2011 7:08pm
same
12th Apr 2011 10:21pm
wow
my friend did the same to me when she found out that i was cutting myself and when evr sh's around i dont feel pain
my friend did the same to me when she found out that i was cutting myself and when evr sh's around i dont feel pain
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