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Release Is Enough
You have found you are as only sick
as your secrets, kept deep inside;
away from those who love and accept you
and her, childlike in outlook, believes
Completely and unreservedly in you. You.
Like past hurts seen through clouded vision
it never was what I thought, rarely the worst.
So today I told on myself, and I hurt her.
And she did exactly what I thought she would
and the thing I need to do most... She forgave me.
Unreservedly, completely, and in good faith.
And I never need to hide my fears again.
Chris Whitenack © 2014
as your secrets, kept deep inside;
away from those who love and accept you
and her, childlike in outlook, believes
Completely and unreservedly in you. You.
Like past hurts seen through clouded vision
it never was what I thought, rarely the worst.
So today I told on myself, and I hurt her.
And she did exactly what I thought she would
and the thing I need to do most... She forgave me.
Unreservedly, completely, and in good faith.
And I never need to hide my fears again.
Chris Whitenack © 2014
Published 2nd Sep 2014
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2nd Sep 2014 1:44am
Sometimes what we wish for the most can be scary but when it happens it does surprise us that there are good hearted people in the world, truly, deeply, completely.
This is why when seeds are planted, they never are planted singularly, always in pairs hoping the warmth and support of one will nourish the other.
Beautiful poem of redemption.
Nicely done Chris.
This is why when seeds are planted, they never are planted singularly, always in pairs hoping the warmth and support of one will nourish the other.
Beautiful poem of redemption.
Nicely done Chris.
2nd Sep 2014 5:29am
Yes, that was difficult, some things I feel the need to just keep to myself, especially when other peoples plates are full.
But
I do them a disservice when I keep things to myself, no matter how dumb I think they may be.
So
I got tired of paying the price for it.
Thank you. That's pretty nice for a cat to say.
:-D
But
I do them a disservice when I keep things to myself, no matter how dumb I think they may be.
So
I got tired of paying the price for it.
Thank you. That's pretty nice for a cat to say.
:-D
2nd Sep 2014 6:15am
yes, Ms. Mitzy is quite smart and she's all girl i tell you, she's got all the characteristics that a female would possess if you know what i mean lol ;)
