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You Know It's Great...
When it's so omnipotent
you claw at the sheets
overwhelmed in sensation
your heart pounds as it beats
When your so close you ache
as you quiver, pant and moan
pleading for your satisfaction
as your inhibitions are all blown
When you quake with fierce desire
needing relief more than fresh air
grabbing, kissing, sucking, biting
a desperation that you both share
When you can't possibly get any closer
once bodies are completely entwined
no other feeling could ever compare
to the satisfaction that you can find
When you scream out as you climax
so gratified, you can't help but to grin
when naughty thoughts start to take over
when you beg for more, without chagrin
you claw at the sheets
overwhelmed in sensation
your heart pounds as it beats
When your so close you ache
as you quiver, pant and moan
pleading for your satisfaction
as your inhibitions are all blown
When you quake with fierce desire
needing relief more than fresh air
grabbing, kissing, sucking, biting
a desperation that you both share
When you can't possibly get any closer
once bodies are completely entwined
no other feeling could ever compare
to the satisfaction that you can find
When you scream out as you climax
so gratified, you can't help but to grin
when naughty thoughts start to take over
when you beg for more, without chagrin
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Re: You Know It's Great...
22nd Aug 2014 3:48am
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22nd Aug 2014 4:19am
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22nd Aug 2014 4:19am
Re: You Know It's Great...
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2014 4:09am
Deborahlee3313,
Love how you stripped it down bare for all to see. Loved your line:
" pleading for your satisfaction
as you inhibitions are all blown "
Enjoyed!
tornado
Love how you stripped it down bare for all to see. Loved your line:
" pleading for your satisfaction
as you inhibitions are all blown "
Enjoyed!
tornado

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re: Re: You Know It's Great...
22nd Aug 2014 4:20am
Re: You Know It's Great...
22nd Aug 2014 6:38am
at times when we read such hot ones
ours automatically stands
at times it cumms
with soft touch of hands
it pre-cumms
so let it cummmm
the erotic poet
has well done
to sum up all
ur
DUP'S
cumM
SO LET HIM HAVE SOME!!
NICE CUMM
ours automatically stands
at times it cumms
with soft touch of hands
it pre-cumms
so let it cummmm
the erotic poet
has well done
to sum up all
ur
DUP'S
cumM
SO LET HIM HAVE SOME!!
NICE CUMM
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re: Re: You Know It's Great...
23rd Aug 2014 2:40am
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Anonymous
22nd Aug 2014 8:22pm
need a cold shower
maybe the water start steaming
nice hot write thanx for it
maybe the water start steaming
nice hot write thanx for it

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re: Re: You Know It's Great...
23rd Aug 2014 2:42am
Re: You Know It's Great...
23rd Aug 2014 1:20pm
clawed sheets and bite marks ... I love when she does that. It tells me I'm doing my job.
Sexy ink. Thanks for sharing.
Sexy ink. Thanks for sharing.
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24th Aug 2014 2:53am
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23rd Aug 2014 10:59pm
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2014 1:23am
Powerful sexy ink......many great lines. Enjoyed! Xo :)

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25th Aug 2014 4:19am