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Honey Please
Three word Inspiration challenge.
Beau, Sing, Log
Smiling brightly I watched as the last log
in the fireplace burned out.
I asked my beau, honey? Please put another
log into the fireplace and sing me my favorite song.
He smiled then threw me into the fire!
Copyright © 2012 Maureen Doucette Abreu
All rights reserved.
Beau, Sing, Log
Smiling brightly I watched as the last log
in the fireplace burned out.
I asked my beau, honey? Please put another
log into the fireplace and sing me my favorite song.
He smiled then threw me into the fire!
Copyright © 2012 Maureen Doucette Abreu
All rights reserved.
Published 19th Aug 2014
| Edited 26th Aug 2014
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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19th Aug 2014 7:51pm
19th Aug 2014 8:18pm
19th Aug 2014 8:16pm
Did he sing burn baby burn as he did it? I'm not sure if I should say ouch or lol... jj
19th Aug 2014 8:19pm
20th Aug 2014 3:11am
20th Aug 2014 4:49am
20th Aug 2014 4:49am
FIRE by the OHIO PLAYERS was playin at the time huh?!!LMAO Jackie!!
Awesome write and read sweets!!
I know you had a stunt double, right?!LOL!!!
Sir Lancelott
Awesome write and read sweets!!
I know you had a stunt double, right?!LOL!!!
Sir Lancelott
20th Aug 2014 4:55am
Shhh, I was hiding in da closet!!!!
Thanks sweetcheeks for all your love and poetry support in my writing! You my friend are the best thank you!!!
((((((((Lance))))))))
Broomie Xoxoxo
Thanks sweetcheeks for all your love and poetry support in my writing! You my friend are the best thank you!!!
((((((((Lance))))))))
Broomie Xoxoxo
20th Aug 2014 12:37pm
Oh Da lady's got jokes!? lol
Very cute lil ink my sweet Broomie
gotta admit, you in the fire
'Burned me up!' lol
Very cute lil ink my sweet Broomie
gotta admit, you in the fire
'Burned me up!' lol
25th Aug 2014 1:49am
*Giggles Po, Yes dat nigga burned me hard !!
Luvs you to the moon and back!
Broomie "D
Luvs you to the moon and back!
Broomie "D
24th Aug 2014 10:13pm
24th Aug 2014 11:03pm
*Giggles* yeah, I have to admit even when I reread it I smile too!
Thanks Mar glad I could put a smile on your face!
Big Hugs*
Zazzles
Thanks Mar glad I could put a smile on your face!
Big Hugs*
Zazzles
Anonymous
25th Aug 2014 1:26am
LMAO!!! Always knew you were sexy.....now I know you're one hot smokin babe. Thank you for the smile. Xo :)
25th Aug 2014 1:51am
Some might say the BBQ was mighty tasty
that night ;) lol Glad you liked this silly fib flowergirl!!!
Always
Jackie Xoxoxox
that night ;) lol Glad you liked this silly fib flowergirl!!!
Always
Jackie Xoxoxox
Anonymous
31st Aug 2014 7:51pm
This is masterful... The type of poetry I could read all day. Write another please.
31st Aug 2014 8:11pm
lol Hello JT, I have a few like this one and some are posted here already ")
I will be posting more here and there.
I am so glad you liked this silly thing.
*Hugs*
Jackie
I will be posting more here and there.
I am so glad you liked this silly thing.
*Hugs*
Jackie
