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Nostalgia Serynu
A familiar breeze,
an old drawn bridge left to rot
I smell nostalgia.
Note:
I am not sure why this was posted with the train left to rot.
it was suppose to read as it is now.
an old drawn bridge left to rot
I smell nostalgia.
Note:
I am not sure why this was posted with the train left to rot.
it was suppose to read as it is now.
Published 17th Aug 2014
| Edited 19th Aug 2014
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17th Aug 2014 8:05pm
19th Aug 2014 1:16am
I have reposted this Serynu
not sure where the train track version came from?
Maybe I was tweaking it and didn't realize I picked that version which was not the final draft.
thanks for the read HM
Broomie
not sure where the train track version came from?
Maybe I was tweaking it and didn't realize I picked that version which was not the final draft.
thanks for the read HM
Broomie
17th Aug 2014 10:57pm
19th Aug 2014 1:24am
Thanks SweetO, it's a Serynu but very similar ")
nice to meet you BTW
Cheers
Broomie
nice to meet you BTW
Cheers
Broomie
18th Aug 2014 00:21am
19th Aug 2014 1:26am
Hello Madame, sadly it was never meant as a train
Serynu I have reposted it.
thanks for stopping by and thanks for your sweet comments ")
Broomie
Serynu I have reposted it.
thanks for stopping by and thanks for your sweet comments ")
Broomie
20th Aug 2014 3:42am
No problem doll! It did work well with the train, though, but I'll pretend it's a train bridge/trestle now. He he! <3
20th Aug 2014 4:36am
18th Aug 2014 00:24am
There's no place like home!!
I Like trains!!
Awesome lil piece Jackie!!!
Love the read sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
I got a new one
I Like trains!!
Awesome lil piece Jackie!!!
Love the read sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
I got a new one
19th Aug 2014 1:27am
Hello big papa! it was never meant as a train theme
I have reposted it and hope you like this even better "0
Broomie Xoxoxoxoxo
I have reposted it and hope you like this even better "0
Broomie Xoxoxoxoxo
19th Aug 2014 9:08am
19th Aug 2014 5:34pm
18th Aug 2014 2:45am
I liked this , short, but powerful imagery , your work is always great \'o'/
19th Aug 2014 1:28am
18th Aug 2014 3:53pm
A sentimental longing of the happy memories in your life really creates a wonderful nostalgic feeling, especially when you're thinking about your place of birth...great write Broomie!
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@EngrVV
19th Aug 2014 1:30am
19th Aug 2014 7:01pm
19th Aug 2014 7:03pm
Hello Mar, yes this was the original serynu.
I am glad you liked it ")
Luv
Broomie
I am glad you liked it ")
Luv
Broomie
