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Enough
I crave his form,
his seed upon my lips
his name falling from
my spine as I whither
away under his shadow
It is not enough;
I crave his poison,
his throat as he catches his breath
his desire as I coil myself around him
my senses cloudy
folded in his sin
It is not enough;
I crave his soul,
his granite like tongue
his touch clawing at my rapture
consuming me
and missing me when I'm gone
his seed upon my lips
his name falling from
my spine as I whither
away under his shadow
It is not enough;
I crave his poison,
his throat as he catches his breath
his desire as I coil myself around him
my senses cloudy
folded in his sin
It is not enough;
I crave his soul,
his granite like tongue
his touch clawing at my rapture
consuming me
and missing me when I'm gone
Published 16th Aug 2014
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Anonymous
16th Aug 2014 8:00pm
Damm str8 dat's sew sexeee.....rmiLL
16th Aug 2014 9:28pm
17th Aug 2014 2:45am
18th Aug 2014 2:58pm
18th Aug 2014 3:56pm
Beautiful work Tommie ... That first stanza is perfection. "his name falling from my spine ..." OMFG!!!
18th Aug 2014 4:14pm
I love it when that happens! I'm pretty sure Big Daddy does too! Hehe, thank you LSP. :)
The all consuming power of love. It's never enough is it? Like you want to consume them and to be one with you. Great write.
18th Aug 2014 9:56pm
11th Dec 2014 8:26pm
A fantastic dance of words, your passion is certainly palpable in what you have written.
"his desire as I coil myself around him" - brilliant
"his desire as I coil myself around him" - brilliant
11th Dec 2014 8:40pm
12th Dec 2014 6:26am
I crave his soul,
his granite like tongue
his touch clawing at my rapture
consuming me
Tommie Lynn I think the above quote from your amazing poem is making me wanting to to consume more of your poems
his granite like tongue
his touch clawing at my rapture
consuming me
Tommie Lynn I think the above quote from your amazing poem is making me wanting to to consume more of your poems
12th Dec 2014 10:48am
