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Lost in fate - Senryu
Sentimental path
A journey with no return
Lost in our own fates
A journey with no return
Lost in our own fates
Published 15th Aug 2014
| Edited 16th Aug 2014
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15th Aug 2014 1:11am
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Anonymous
15th Aug 2014 1:26am
It is what it is..
I feel you Ms. Chi.
I feel you Ms. Chi.
16th Aug 2014 12:05pm
16th Aug 2014 1:03pm
Wandervogel? You mean the group founded in the 1890s? Just googled it. Hm ...
Thanks for the 'evocative', Paul. Life is a path and who tells us to follow it blindly without looking to the right or to the left. But if we do so, we might get lost in the thorny shrubbery beneath the path.
Thanks for the 'evocative', Paul. Life is a path and who tells us to follow it blindly without looking to the right or to the left. But if we do so, we might get lost in the thorny shrubbery beneath the path.
15th Aug 2014 4:47am
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15th Aug 2014 7:57am
...traveling a road that we're familiar with, yet we end up lost.... Enjoyed Chi! Xo
16th Aug 2014 1:12pm
Thanks, dear Rain! Expecially when we think we're familiar with the path. One moment of unattentivness and you go astray ...
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16th Aug 2014 1:17pm
Is it already set for us or do we have the choice? I think we have ... Reminds me of Jean-Paul Sartre's 'Les jeux sont faits'.
Anonymous
16th Aug 2014 10:06am
This one I could read forever
Just that the image is so soothing
Just that the image is so soothing
16th Aug 2014 1:22pm
16th Aug 2014 2:55pm
Honestly? You write the best haiku n Senryu
pieces I've ever read... At least TO ME u do! :)
pieces I've ever read... At least TO ME u do! :)
16th Aug 2014 5:47pm
*blush* You flatter me, Poe! Thank you so much, muah! It's just because I love the haiku form so much.
You know LobodeSanPedro, I suppose. Read his haiku, they're wonderful! And read Kaga no Chiyo if you're interested. She a female Japanese haiku woman poet, a rare appearence in the early 18th century (1703-1775). She wrote wonderful haiku and inspired me to try on my own :-).
You know LobodeSanPedro, I suppose. Read his haiku, they're wonderful! And read Kaga no Chiyo if you're interested. She a female Japanese haiku woman poet, a rare appearence in the early 18th century (1703-1775). She wrote wonderful haiku and inspired me to try on my own :-).
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16th Aug 2014 8:46pm
Assumed that there were more of us, sharneindium. Thanks a lot for taking your time to read and leave your welcome thoughts.
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18th Aug 2014 10:14pm
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