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YOU REMIND ME OF HOME
Music never felt so rich in vigor and rhythm
till you took my hand and led me to the dance floor.
Sunshine was superseded the day your raw fingers ran over my almond skin
Sex and romance was okey until you showed me the true meaning of good loving.
Life was mere existence until I drank from the well of your wild and wickedness.
You remind me of a faraway place I once knew
loved and belonged.
A place where two wrongs would make a right
Where defying logic and inconformity to status quo was usual recommended.
You remind me of home.
till you took my hand and led me to the dance floor.
Sunshine was superseded the day your raw fingers ran over my almond skin
Sex and romance was okey until you showed me the true meaning of good loving.
Life was mere existence until I drank from the well of your wild and wickedness.
You remind me of a faraway place I once knew
loved and belonged.
A place where two wrongs would make a right
Where defying logic and inconformity to status quo was usual recommended.
You remind me of home.
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Re: YOU REMIND ME OF HOME
13th Aug 2014 5:41pm
As the saying goes, there's no place like home...life without love is meaningless and most beautiful if shared with someone that reminds you where you came from. Good read, Peninnah...write on!
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re: Re: YOU REMIND ME OF HOME
13th Aug 2014 6:17pm
Re: YOU REMIND ME OF HOME
13th Aug 2014 7:04pm
re: Re: YOU REMIND ME OF HOME
13th Aug 2014 8:55pm
Haha!S is that an invite?!Haha,oh luv,this honeypot was made for a breathing magicstick!!!haha have a good one dear!Kisses♥!
Re: YOU REMIND ME OF HOME
13th Aug 2014 9:19pm
Hot and Loving ink sweets!!
Great write!!
Awesome read!!
I was touched by this piece!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write!!
Awesome read!!
I was touched by this piece!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: YOU REMIND ME OF HOME
14th Aug 2014 8:45am
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14th Aug 2014 8:45am
Re: YOU REMIND ME OF HOME
14th Aug 2014 12:48pm
Aaaaawww soooooo sweetly touching this is!
Yup, hard to beat that feeling of HOME :)
Yup, hard to beat that feeling of HOME :)
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14th Aug 2014 9:31pm
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Re: YOU REMIND ME OF HOME
15th Aug 2014 10:50pm
Lady P...this is a sensational poem...remember that there is no place like home and home is not necessarily where you live but is where the heart is...and that is why, no matter where we are, we always yearn for home...Please be safe and well...Thanks and take care...Jimbo
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16th Aug 2014 7:51am