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Female Lover
I have wrecked
passion
and
desire
Kissed cherry
lips
and
tongue
Made the siren
sing
and
moan
I have lit the
fire's
and
flames
Watched her
dance
and
sway
Drank from her
sugary
and
sweet
I have made her
depart
and
come
passion
and
desire
Kissed cherry
lips
and
tongue
Made the siren
sing
and
moan
I have lit the
fire's
and
flames
Watched her
dance
and
sway
Drank from her
sugary
and
sweet
I have made her
depart
and
come
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Re: Female Lover
11th Aug 2014 9:01pm
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2014 10:17pm
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re: Re: Female Lover
11th Aug 2014 10:48pm
Everything! I'm inspired by everything around me.
This one just came to me Jack :-)
This one just came to me Jack :-)
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11th Aug 2014 10:37pm
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12th Aug 2014 00:22am
Re: Female Lover
Anonymous
12th Aug 2014 2:42am
"Made the siren
sing
and
moan"
I certainly agree with Jack here - "Ethereal, original and powerful."
I also like the end a lot, exudes such control -
"I have made her
depart,
and
come"
"I have wrecked passion" also, such a dominating work! Well done.
sing
and
moan"
I certainly agree with Jack here - "Ethereal, original and powerful."
I also like the end a lot, exudes such control -
"I have made her
depart,
and
come"
"I have wrecked passion" also, such a dominating work! Well done.
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re: Re: Female Lover
12th Aug 2014 12:18pm
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Anonymous
12th Aug 2014 3:30am
Tommie Lynn,
I see Homer left out the best part of the Odyssey! : ) Enjoyed!
tornado
I see Homer left out the best part of the Odyssey! : ) Enjoyed!
tornado
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12th Aug 2014 12:19pm
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