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CARE
His name was Hassan Gba-Kamara and he posted on my Facebook
“Don’t just love our natural resources, love and care for us too”
I scroll to a picture of a man on his back, knees up in muddy rags
In the gutter of a market street. Yes, a man. The dust flattened
Only by the morning storm. Around him stand armed guards afraid.
He is dying of ebola, a disease with a cure but his country is poor.
He is dying of ebola, without human touch, dignity or farewell.
His country gave the iron… I say gave because no fair price was given…
His country gave the iron in the steel that became the spoon
With which I stir my hot chocolate. The chocolate came from the cocoa
That came from his motherland as did the band of gold around my finger.
Gold that says you love me that was pulled from the bowels of his earth,
Till cyanide blocked the lungs and mercury ran and made his children blind.
Blindness, a disease of a world that failed to love and to care for him too.
“Don’t just love our natural resources, love and care for us too”
I scroll to a picture of a man on his back, knees up in muddy rags
In the gutter of a market street. Yes, a man. The dust flattened
Only by the morning storm. Around him stand armed guards afraid.
He is dying of ebola, a disease with a cure but his country is poor.
He is dying of ebola, without human touch, dignity or farewell.
His country gave the iron… I say gave because no fair price was given…
His country gave the iron in the steel that became the spoon
With which I stir my hot chocolate. The chocolate came from the cocoa
That came from his motherland as did the band of gold around my finger.
Gold that says you love me that was pulled from the bowels of his earth,
Till cyanide blocked the lungs and mercury ran and made his children blind.
Blindness, a disease of a world that failed to love and to care for him too.
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Re: CARE
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10th Aug 2014 8:51pm
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10th Aug 2014 9:36pm
thanks Gabriel - thank you for commenting on this - your support is very much appreciated
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10th Aug 2014 9:09pm
This is powerful, whale, luv :-*.
And, I am grateful that it is. We need to be reminded of our essential interconnectedness and of our ability to practice practical compassion. That what we do each day can have widespread impact.
Thank you, luv, for your unflinching honesty and caring. :-*
And, I am grateful that it is. We need to be reminded of our essential interconnectedness and of our ability to practice practical compassion. That what we do each day can have widespread impact.
Thank you, luv, for your unflinching honesty and caring. :-*
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10th Aug 2014 9:37pm
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10th Aug 2014 11:02pm
you express it so well, so
unthinking our attitude to
the misery around us, from
which we benefit, of course...
this is a great piece of
writing...
unthinking our attitude to
the misery around us, from
which we benefit, of course...
this is a great piece of
writing...
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10th Aug 2014 11:06pm
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10th Aug 2014 11:31pm
Thank you Big Dog your support is very much appreciated - as you've shown the way in your words
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10th Aug 2014 11:43pm
I really. just. love this whale. The last verse was excellent. Great piece.
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2014 11:56am
many things to be found in this poem. It both has the reflective and the agony part. It reaches out with hands of mercy. And the style is amazing, how you weave each line and them forward.
Much admired!
Much admired!
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11th Aug 2014 6:19pm
Mourganna you were my mentor when I first came to this site and so your words and thoughts are so very much appreciated
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11th Aug 2014 7:23pm
When men worship brotherhood above gold and money we will truly be in heaven. The poor pay the price for the world's greed. Awesome heart tugging write Whale.
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11th Aug 2014 8:01pm
wise words Xmar _ I'm quoting Bob marley who says it best - one love one heart - hear the children crying
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17th Aug 2014 1:28pm
Irony of life! if only the best of us had a conscious,they we would care more...But again...
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