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What I'd give....
What I'd feel if you were to kiss me
A giving soul tethering me tightly in loving embrace
as tears of rapture were gently wiped from my face
Ohhhh what I'd feel...
What I'd do if you were with me
A tangled lace of lips and limbs upon the bed
Hearing your heart beat, as on your shoulder I would lay my contented head.
Mmmmmmm what I'd do....
What I'd crave if you were to hold me
Warming depths of desire, sparking a pulsing need
Deep kisses, caressing, touching, tasting you with eager greed
Ohhhhh what I'd crave.....
What I'd plead if you were to ask me
All that I've longed and wished for, passion unrestrained
You, my lover, who sates me; every sensual thought and need entertained
Mmmmmmm what I'd plead....
What I'd give to watch you love me
To see your tongue and mouth pressed to silken lips
To gaze upon you, as you licked my desire from your glistening fingertips...
Ohhhhh what I'd give...
***for my Loving man (my Sunshine)
A giving soul tethering me tightly in loving embrace
as tears of rapture were gently wiped from my face
Ohhhh what I'd feel...
What I'd do if you were with me
A tangled lace of lips and limbs upon the bed
Hearing your heart beat, as on your shoulder I would lay my contented head.
Mmmmmmm what I'd do....
What I'd crave if you were to hold me
Warming depths of desire, sparking a pulsing need
Deep kisses, caressing, touching, tasting you with eager greed
Ohhhhh what I'd crave.....
What I'd plead if you were to ask me
All that I've longed and wished for, passion unrestrained
You, my lover, who sates me; every sensual thought and need entertained
Mmmmmmm what I'd plead....
What I'd give to watch you love me
To see your tongue and mouth pressed to silken lips
To gaze upon you, as you licked my desire from your glistening fingertips...
Ohhhhh what I'd give...
***for my Loving man (my Sunshine)
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Re: What I'd give....
9th Aug 2014 4:24pm
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10th Aug 2014 6:17pm
thank you Sir...sooo happy to see you again :) I appreciate the read and thoughtful comment..blushing.. with love and respect..domore
Re: What I'd give....
9th Aug 2014 8:25pm
Such a soul to have this passion that pours from your veins. What so many wouldn't give to have someone who felt that way for us. What a pleasure to read.
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re: Re: What I'd give....
10th Aug 2014 6:20pm
Dear Awakened, your words move me to happy tears..your kindness within your comment is very much appreciated..glad that this gave you a moments pleasure in reading.. with deepest respect..domore
Re: What I'd give....
9th Aug 2014 11:31pm
re: Re: What I'd give....
10th Aug 2014 6:21pm
thank you kindly whale.. very happy to have you visit me again..your comments a joy to receive.. with much respect..domore
Re: What I'd give....
10th Aug 2014 5:46pm
re: Re: What I'd give....
10th Aug 2014 6:23pm
:) thank you ifsheonlyknew... I am honored by the read and comment you so kindly give.. makes my day to see you again visit my ink :) with love and respect to you.. domore
Re: What I'd give....
11th Aug 2014 3:19am
With senses in full effect
the force of love can't be denied
transcends earthly concerns
a wave that won't soon subside...
the force of love can't be denied
transcends earthly concerns
a wave that won't soon subside...
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re: Re: What I'd give....
11th Aug 2014 5:10pm
Thank you Jazzmanor... Apreciate you stopping by to read this.. and the thoughtful commment. Love is indeed a wave .. I happily ride :) with much respect..domore
Re: What I'd give....
Anonymous
11th Aug 2014 3:35pm
Very sensual! Enjoyed
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re: Re: What I'd give....
11th Aug 2014 5:11pm
Thank you JT for the read and comment.. I am glad you enjoyed :) with respect..domore
Re: What I'd give....
13th Aug 2014 6:57am
Dear Lady, what I'd give ....
All that is ...
The land from West to East
The stars from South to North
All that I am ....
Spirit, soul, body
Intuition, heart, mind
That's what I've given ... uh, I mean
Oh, that's what I'd give
:)
Look through the front window, you know
who is parked on the street waiting with untold treasure.
XO,
YLH
All that is ...
The land from West to East
The stars from South to North
All that I am ....
Spirit, soul, body
Intuition, heart, mind
That's what I've given ... uh, I mean
Oh, that's what I'd give
:)
Look through the front window, you know
who is parked on the street waiting with untold treasure.
XO,
YLH
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re: Re: What I'd give....
13th Aug 2014 7:54pm
Dearest.. VP.. you have successfully moved me to tears..thank you..your words touch me deeply.. mmm what you'd give.. I'd gladly receive..and return in the fullest measure.. you know my heart.. with love and respect..YLL xoxoxo domore
and
Ohhhhh I thought I was gonna get to see YOU outside.. LOL Brinks is welcome tho.. LOL they'll be making return trip your way.. I am sure.. soon :):)
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Ohhhhh I thought I was gonna get to see YOU outside.. LOL Brinks is welcome tho.. LOL they'll be making return trip your way.. I am sure.. soon :):)
Re: What I'd give....
16th Aug 2014 1:22pm
re: Re: What I'd give....
17th Aug 2014 1:34am
Thank you ever so much GKP.. you are tooo kind.. a smile brought with your comment..with much respect..domore
Re: What I'd give....
5th Sep 2014 3:07pm
Yes'm. Some of us have given all for this. The price so costly, but the purchase so dear.
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re: Re: What I'd give....
8th Sep 2014 5:23pm
thank you Hawkdude... I appreciate the read and kind comment..Your words ring true.. the purchase so dear :) Indeed!! :)
with much respect.. xoxo domore
with much respect.. xoxo domore