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Rhythm
Passion at first glance
A love that is flowing
Well Choreographed
A timeless dance
Sometimes they fight
Angry words are said
Yet decades have past
Still behaving just wed
They prove their devotion
Remembering the oath shared
"I DO, TIL FOREVER, AND BEYOUND DEATHS BED"
These promised words can be heard
By the beating of their hearts
A duet rhythmically in sync
Love eternally tethered
A love that is flowing
Well Choreographed
A timeless dance
Sometimes they fight
Angry words are said
Yet decades have past
Still behaving just wed
They prove their devotion
Remembering the oath shared
"I DO, TIL FOREVER, AND BEYOUND DEATHS BED"
These promised words can be heard
By the beating of their hearts
A duet rhythmically in sync
Love eternally tethered
Published 9th Aug 2014
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10th Aug 2014 4:19am
I am touched by this as if reflects the relationship I saw with my parents and more recently, my brother and his wife.
Thank you for writing this.
Thank you for writing this.
17th Aug 2014 1:13pm
Thank you very much Jazz. I love your work so your feed back has made my day.
laugh, you haven't been hit in the head recently? Even I don't love the majority of what I write!
23rd Aug 2014 1:41pm
Putting thoughts to paper and sharing...I think we all have been hit in the head! lol
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