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Divorce
Imagine a body
that has just lost it's core
now vigorously falling apart
you call it lovesickness but
do atoms die
of a broken heart?
that has just lost it's core
now vigorously falling apart
you call it lovesickness but
do atoms die
of a broken heart?
Published 9th Aug 2014
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9th Aug 2014 4:03pm
Poignant sodium589...
Then again that word's not sitting quite right with me but I'll leave it there, go to bed & revisit in the morning & see then if I'll change it.... ;)
Then again that word's not sitting quite right with me but I'll leave it there, go to bed & revisit in the morning & see then if I'll change it.... ;)
9th Aug 2014 5:45pm
I really liked the drama your words made me imagine.
I am no expert by all means; and the stuggle us writers have to put our thoughts in order on paper can be painful.
I am no expert by all means; and the stuggle us writers have to put our thoughts in order on paper can be painful.
9th Aug 2014 6:25pm
Thanks for commenting the poem. In most cases, your statement holds true, but writing this one was :-) :-).
9th Aug 2014 6:37pm
9th Aug 2014 8:08pm
Timeless question well asked.
Atoms never die, but live another day to fill another void.
Atoms never die, but live another day to fill another void.
10th Aug 2014 00:05am
yep its pretty shit for everyone when they split
cool write Sodium and welcome to DU
cool write Sodium and welcome to DU
14th Aug 2014 5:56am
14th Aug 2014 6:39am
