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a brief case...
she touched his eye,
she touched his volume,
she touched his shoe,
she went on and on
as I wasn't listening;
suddenly there he was,
a voice says immediately
to keep it short and sweet;
I run right into it every time,
you just never know, you know,
is it strange that I try
and avoid this very situation?
she touched his volume,
she touched his shoe,
she went on and on
as I wasn't listening;
suddenly there he was,
a voice says immediately
to keep it short and sweet;
I run right into it every time,
you just never know, you know,
is it strange that I try
and avoid this very situation?
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Re: a brief case...
Not strange, a type of conditioning... I have agoraphobia and I learned that over the years I frequented certain places or activities less because they had negative effects on me... mainly sever anxiety...
Enjoyed as usual Reita...
Enjoyed as usual Reita...
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re: Re: a brief case...
9th Aug 2014 3:43pm
Re: a brief case...
9th Aug 2014 1:07pm
Once again you have me trying to peel back the layers to make my own sense of it ...
... the immediate thought was the chance encounter of ex lovers - an awkward affair ...
... but then within that I saw the woman with a little girl, her daughter ... his maybe
I love! your first stanza!
... the immediate thought was the chance encounter of ex lovers - an awkward affair ...
... but then within that I saw the woman with a little girl, her daughter ... his maybe
I love! your first stanza!
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re: Re: a brief case...
9th Aug 2014 3:44pm
You definitely make life more interesting. Not to mention the internet.. :) thank you so much Lobo again for your awesome comment.
Re: a brief case...
9th Aug 2014 4:40pm
aha...muy bien y bravissimo, cara mia!!
you is getting
too good
at this,
g'oddb'less ye!
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re: Re: a brief case...
9th Aug 2014 4:59pm
Re: a brief case...
10th Aug 2014 00:02am
your poems are some of the
most interesting and intriguing
and surreal I've read in a long
time...
most interesting and intriguing
and surreal I've read in a long
time...
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re: Re: a brief case...
10th Aug 2014 8:55am
Re. a brief case...
5th Apr 2016 5:02am
i like long & slow...lingering ...till the wax has gone cold from the candles dance....:)
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5th Apr 2016 11:22pm