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Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
Watching out the window
Eagerly waiting for a glimpse
A familiar slender figure appears
Out for an afternoon stroll downtown
I feel as if I am being watched
Looking back over my shoulder-it's HER
Fire instantly ignited, cannot be contained
Soul flutters as her sweet ass sways
Beautiful smile seductively waves
Her enticing grin and look in her eyes
Tell me ALL that I need to know about her thoughts
Just like me.......she is craving more
My body trembles with nerves
As I see her turn to the door
Heart pounds as the buzzer rings
I feel myself getting wet
Nervousness building-standing on the porch
Already aching throughout to taste her lips
My breath escaped me when the door opened
Tight red dress hugging every curve sexily
Painted red toes peeping out of sandals
Mmmmmm.....she wasn't expecting any visitors today
She came to the door in a sheer purple robe
Creamy supple cleavage peeking out
Closed the door to lock in our worlds
She gracefully slipped off my robe
As Iifted her dress to reveal a pantiless slit
Nipples as sweet as strawberries with tits of cream
She is finally mine for the day
No interruptions from anywhere
Sucked her clit while she screamed "Mercy"
Of course I was relentless not to stop her quivering
She was the best tasting coochie I've ever had
All that I could do was submit to her tongue
Praying endlessly that her fingers joined in soon
Arching back, grinding hips.....soaking wet
My fingers slid in her pussy gently at first
Feeling her wet juicy walls
Lips kissed tbeir way up to hers
Sucking her tongue with a hunger I didn't know I had
Oh dear God I'm ready to CUUUMMMM!!!!
We both screamed for "Mercy" but neither gave in
Mmmmmmm......what a night we had!!!!
Eagerly waiting for a glimpse
A familiar slender figure appears
Out for an afternoon stroll downtown
I feel as if I am being watched
Looking back over my shoulder-it's HER
Fire instantly ignited, cannot be contained
Soul flutters as her sweet ass sways
Beautiful smile seductively waves
Her enticing grin and look in her eyes
Tell me ALL that I need to know about her thoughts
Just like me.......she is craving more
My body trembles with nerves
As I see her turn to the door
Heart pounds as the buzzer rings
I feel myself getting wet
Nervousness building-standing on the porch
Already aching throughout to taste her lips
My breath escaped me when the door opened
Tight red dress hugging every curve sexily
Painted red toes peeping out of sandals
Mmmmmm.....she wasn't expecting any visitors today
She came to the door in a sheer purple robe
Creamy supple cleavage peeking out
Closed the door to lock in our worlds
She gracefully slipped off my robe
As Iifted her dress to reveal a pantiless slit
Nipples as sweet as strawberries with tits of cream
She is finally mine for the day
No interruptions from anywhere
Sucked her clit while she screamed "Mercy"
Of course I was relentless not to stop her quivering
She was the best tasting coochie I've ever had
All that I could do was submit to her tongue
Praying endlessly that her fingers joined in soon
Arching back, grinding hips.....soaking wet
My fingers slid in her pussy gently at first
Feeling her wet juicy walls
Lips kissed tbeir way up to hers
Sucking her tongue with a hunger I didn't know I had
Oh dear God I'm ready to CUUUMMMM!!!!
We both screamed for "Mercy" but neither gave in
Mmmmmmm......what a night we had!!!!
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Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
6th Aug 2014 9:25pm
I want to join in! This amazingly hot! This is every mans dream to have, two beautiful women at once. You two painted it sublimely. Congratulations you two. Great write.
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7th Aug 2014 5:43am
Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
6th Aug 2014 9:57pm
Beautifully done sexy ladies. The softness of a delicate feminine touch is desired by all and can be very irresistible as your poem demonstrated. No communication, just 2 eyes watching 2 bodies talk to each other, full filling each others fantasies. Thank you for sharing this hot erotic passionate ink.
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re: Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
7th Aug 2014 5:50am
The right two people never need words. U instinctively knowhow to please eachother. Thank you hun for giving us a read.
Xoxozo
Belle
Xoxozo
Belle
Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
6th Aug 2014 10:31pm
re: Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
7th Aug 2014 6:30am
Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
6th Aug 2014 10:40pm
Oh mercy!!!
You two...how naughty😈...but yummy😆
picture painted clear and hot!!!💋
You two...how naughty😈...but yummy😆
picture painted clear and hot!!!💋
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Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
Anonymous
6th Aug 2014 11:35pm
Hot write you two, a lot of great lines

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Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
7th Aug 2014 2:11am
Extremely well done, lilsouthernbelle and flowergirl, luvs :-*! You are both delectable!
Are you quite certain you don't need a bit of chocolate in there though? ;-)
Are you quite certain you don't need a bit of chocolate in there though? ;-)
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Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
7th Aug 2014 4:39am
Sexy Belle.......thank you so much for the honor of colliding our ink together This was a lot of fun to write. Appreciate you sharing your time with me. Luv and hugs xo :)
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Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
7th Aug 2014 4:50am
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7th Aug 2014 1:55pm
Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
7th Aug 2014 8:39am
re: Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
7th Aug 2014 2:49pm
Hmmmm.....Mr Vegas thank you so very much. Had lots of fun writing this with our flower
Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
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7th Aug 2014 11:44am
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re: Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
7th Aug 2014 3:45pm
Hmmmm....was this boner inducing hun?
I chose the pic hun....so glad you liked it.
Ur gracious comment about todays youth has truly warmed my soul darlin. As always u so value ur opinion my dear friend
Xoxoxo
Belle
I chose the pic hun....so glad you liked it.
Ur gracious comment about todays youth has truly warmed my soul darlin. As always u so value ur opinion my dear friend
Xoxoxo
Belle
Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
7th Aug 2014 2:12pm
Dare I say stimulating ?
Well done girls
We guys love thinking about this scenario longingly, in porn it's always so fake. This is sexy and sexual with the right amount of drive !
Well done girls
We guys love thinking about this scenario longingly, in porn it's always so fake. This is sexy and sexual with the right amount of drive !
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re: Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
7th Aug 2014 11:51pm
Dare I ask just how stimulated you were?
Quite the compliment coming from you Speak
Glad you enjoyed it darlin
Hugs
Belle
Quite the compliment coming from you Speak
Glad you enjoyed it darlin
Hugs
Belle
Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
8th Aug 2014 2:14am
Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
8th Aug 2014 5:16pm
Yep it is confirmed just as I suspected earlier...flowergirl and you are my FAVOURITEST writing duo...you both have the chemistry and magic and "other things" flowing...what a sensational sensually erotic write and read...Parts III, IV, V etc., pretty please...Please be safe and well...thanks and take care...Jimbo
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re: Re: Dream Lady pt2 (co-write with flowergirl)
8th Aug 2014 7:12pm
Oh...thank you so very much for such a raving review darlin. Appreciated so very much. Its ALL flower im just along for the ride.
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle