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Wires
Forlorn forgotten city,
Wires smother sinking walls,
Debris deters relentless roots.
Abandoned centuries ago
With blood bought life.
Lifeless concise concrete seas:
Bountiful alluring Atlantis.
Wires smother sinking walls,
Debris deters relentless roots.
Abandoned centuries ago
With blood bought life.
Lifeless concise concrete seas:
Bountiful alluring Atlantis.
Published 8th Apr 2011
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8th Apr 2011 1:39am
Very good
An elegant, concise piece with a mysterious essence
You dramatically undersell yourself with that username you chose
An elegant, concise piece with a mysterious essence
You dramatically undersell yourself with that username you chose
8th Apr 2011 3:45am
Thank you for the kind words :D
Yes and no, I have that name from WoW It used to be my main characters name, because the character had HUGE ears, and copyrights wouldn't let me use Dumbo, so I had to improvise. Henceforth the name Dumbboo has stayed with me for quite some time.:) Thats the story :D though you probably didn't want to hear it, in that case sorry for wasting your time.
Yes and no, I have that name from WoW It used to be my main characters name, because the character had HUGE ears, and copyrights wouldn't let me use Dumbo, so I had to improvise. Henceforth the name Dumbboo has stayed with me for quite some time.:) Thats the story :D though you probably didn't want to hear it, in that case sorry for wasting your time.
8th Apr 2011 5:44am
haha
I am a fallen leaf who enjoys the burning of it's time
Cool poem, look foreward to reading more from you
I am a fallen leaf who enjoys the burning of it's time
Cool poem, look foreward to reading more from you
8th Apr 2011 5:50am
