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oh little darling.
oh little darling,
your eyes are so red,
so much tears and heartbreak,
you wish you were dead.
you clasp at the teddy you won at the fair,
crying and screaming, you're gasping for air.
oh little darling,
you crave the taste of a bullet,
you were to die that night and you knew it.
you fantasise about the feel of a gun,
while you sit with a hand full of pills,
and a bottle of rum.
oh little darling,
you can taste the sadness,
you'd rather die than be consumed by the madness.
one more pill, that's all it will take,
you close your eyes, but you never wake.
your eyes are so red,
so much tears and heartbreak,
you wish you were dead.
you clasp at the teddy you won at the fair,
crying and screaming, you're gasping for air.
oh little darling,
you crave the taste of a bullet,
you were to die that night and you knew it.
you fantasise about the feel of a gun,
while you sit with a hand full of pills,
and a bottle of rum.
oh little darling,
you can taste the sadness,
you'd rather die than be consumed by the madness.
one more pill, that's all it will take,
you close your eyes, but you never wake.
Published 3rd Aug 2014
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Anonymous
5th Aug 2014 3:47am
"oh little darling,
your eyes are so red,
so much tears and heartbreak,
you wish you were dead.
you clasp at the teddy you won at the fair,
crying and screaming, you're gasping for air."
-This is great
Great rhyme and flow throughout, can very much relate to this piece. Keep ya head up though :)
your eyes are so red,
so much tears and heartbreak,
you wish you were dead.
you clasp at the teddy you won at the fair,
crying and screaming, you're gasping for air."
-This is great
Great rhyme and flow throughout, can very much relate to this piece. Keep ya head up though :)
5th Aug 2014 8:33am
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18th Nov 2015 10:24am
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