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Flower behind the Broken glass
Broken glass behind a flower
By Valley of the son of Ole
Beauty is trapped
something we all have lacked.
The glass stops us
pouring out blood and puss,
cracking out
the blood goes through and about.
Trying to think
lost on the final brink.
The beauty is still trapped
still the thing that has to be lacked,
your stuck away from beauty like the mass
with the flower behind the broken glass.
By Valley of the son of Ole
Beauty is trapped
something we all have lacked.
The glass stops us
pouring out blood and puss,
cracking out
the blood goes through and about.
Trying to think
lost on the final brink.
The beauty is still trapped
still the thing that has to be lacked,
your stuck away from beauty like the mass
with the flower behind the broken glass.
Published 3rd Aug 2014
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3rd Aug 2014 3:46pm
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Anonymous
3rd Aug 2014 8:31pm
Welcome to DU!! The title called to me....LOL!!! Feel as if you've written a piece of me here. Deep emotion you touch here. :)
4th Aug 2014 5:36am
maybe if the beauty trapped away from one was put in a short, short, short line, it would further signify a feeling of...well whatever you think it signifies--i mean, the being trapped, while the beauty seems to be quite enjoying itself, securely away from you--but i trust you know what you're talking about. and this poem is quite good enough the way it is. i'm merely making a suggestion for you to consider for possible future writing.
4th Aug 2014 3:58pm
Thank you for your insight i am glad to meet a person whom can help me be the best poet I can be.
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