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Advice to a Virgin
''Oh come for a spree
Entry is free
I've wanted a man
Since puberty began''
This is no way to loose virginity
You should find someone with whom you've affinity
Relax in his arms
Enjoy his charms
Find somewhere to nest
A bed is the best
Get naked and kiss
Prepare for the bliss
Ease his penis within
May hurt to begin
Relax while he plunges
He will come with the lunges
Keep close for a while
A smile will beguile
You're a virgin no more
Nor yet a whore
Published 2nd Aug 2014
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2nd Aug 2014 8:46pm
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2nd Aug 2014 9:19pm
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2nd Aug 2014 10:37pm
9th Dec 2014 00:31am
Not bad, you pretty much just said if they go to bed with someone who they don't even love then their first time won't be very special and I agree with that; you could find the cutest, hottest guy, but if you have little to none in common with him, can't even have a serious conversation with him without him bringing up something sexual about you or if he doesn't even remember/know your name then of course he wouldn't be worth losing it to.
I just wish young girls especially those in HighSchool can learn from stuff like this.
I just wish young girls especially those in HighSchool can learn from stuff like this.
28th Dec 2014 2:51pm
This was very straightforward
and blunt, but, none of us hold
back on here, (or, at least, don't
have to).
"Oh come for a spree
Entry is free
I've wanted a man
Since puberty began''
It sounds like you be the icing on
the cake for the one who's being
able to break it in for the first.
Spree makes me think of shopping
spree... Go in fast and hard and
take all you want... Pillage and
Plunder the store.
Maybe you ought to tell them to
just ease in and browse first... don't
worry; they'll like what they see and
will come again, (I know, big Pun).
Or, tell it how you like. It's your story
which was sensual and enticing as
"Hel," Herself...
Pan
and blunt, but, none of us hold
back on here, (or, at least, don't
have to).
"Oh come for a spree
Entry is free
I've wanted a man
Since puberty began''
It sounds like you be the icing on
the cake for the one who's being
able to break it in for the first.
Spree makes me think of shopping
spree... Go in fast and hard and
take all you want... Pillage and
Plunder the store.
Maybe you ought to tell them to
just ease in and browse first... don't
worry; they'll like what they see and
will come again, (I know, big Pun).
Or, tell it how you like. It's your story
which was sensual and enticing as
"Hel," Herself...
Pan
