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In This Moment
In this moment
Of magic and awe
The apparent is consumed
With fervor and delight
Sweet icing with sprinkles galore
The dessert before
The meal
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Of magic and awe
The apparent is consumed
With fervor and delight
Sweet icing with sprinkles galore
The dessert before
The meal
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Published 2nd Aug 2014
| Edited 3rd Feb 2017
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2nd Aug 2014 7:50pm
No taste sweeter than this moment - cool writings xmar with it's easy rhyme and rhythm
2nd Aug 2014 8:06pm
2nd Aug 2014 7:52pm
2nd Aug 2014 8:08pm
Mmm... xmar82, luv :-*, this is simply enchanting! You make me long for glass slippers, and tea and cakes - then satin and lace and other things too...
2nd Aug 2014 9:04pm
2nd Aug 2014 9:03pm
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3rd Aug 2014 1:15am
5th Aug 2014 10:38pm
Thanks seascape. I believe we enjoy people starting with their appearance then their soft interior.
Anonymous
3rd Aug 2014 10:19am
For some reason, this little gem made think of the scene of the last supper....
Great write there!
Great write there!
3rd Aug 2014 8:04pm
I was speaking of the outer beauty in things. Maybe that's why? Pleasure having you stop by.
Anonymous
4th Aug 2014 11:09pm
a man who 'sees'....
dare i say not just the outer beauty but the beauty within...
before he feeds.....
:)
dare i say not just the outer beauty but the beauty within...
before he feeds.....
:)
5th Aug 2014 8:44pm
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